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『Ten Count』テンカウント部!《Takarai Rihito》

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thanks for the link and wow what a coincidence that you used the same flower which has a beautiful meaning btw..

 

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hmm wonder what Kurose said here.. seems like a turning point.. anyhow Shirotani is really pissed off -_- and again there's a flashback with his dad..

 

What we know so far about Shirotani: He doesn’t mind when Kurose touches him in a sexual way and doing things to him he doesn’t even want but secretly likes which shows he is a M ;)

He doesn’t like being caressed by him like patting his head (he was startled and was gripped with fear) seems like that kind of affection reminds him of his father.. and Kurose could only hug him once because shirotanis head was covered by his jacket.

Maybe number ten is "Let love into your life“.. or "Let someone into your life“ you know with love comes trust.. he never had a friend before not to mention a lover maybe this is the reason why kurose is pushing so hard on him... Oh boy what a hard case ;)

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Ten Count is one of my favourite mangas. I love it so much and the drawing style... rabbit1

 

You know you can leave comments on the pages, yeah? It's hilarious. I'll make an album with them.

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Okay. I just have to, okay. Imma translate it now though kanji are seen barely. BUT MAN.

I will omit SFX since I have no time to do a full translation.

 

[COVER]

Title: And my body, and my heart - with/in these hands (of his).

[PAGE 01]

Shirotani: Haa...haaa

Shirotani: ...-rry...I am sorry...

[PAGE 02]

Shirotani: Dad...

Note: OMG, Kurose was about to caress his back but stopped!

[PAGE 03]

Shirotani: Haa..ha..

Shirotani: It's....enough.. I am going home..

SFX: STAGGERS!

Shirotani: Ah-!

Thoughts (Shirotani) : I have no strength in my legs..

[PAGE 04]

Shirotani: S-Sometimes..I can't understand..what's in Kurose-kun's mind...

Shirotani: It's really scary..

Kurose: What kind of thoughts am I having...You really-...

Kurose: .....

Shirotani: Please, let me go..

[PAGE 05]

Thoughts (Shirotani) : It's all sticky...

Kurose: So you really don't understand what is it which I have in mind?

Note: You really don't understand what I mean by my actions* (alternative)?

[PAGE 06]

Kurose: All I think of is my desire for you. And you are what reigns over me.

[PAGE 07]

Shirotani: Nothing of which I can understand... Please don't get me so agitated ever again.

Thoughts (Shirotani) : He desires me.. he means in 'this way'..? ...This can't be true.

Kurose: Shirotani-san..

[PAGE 08]

Kurose: Just a bit after we met*... you wanted to hear why I so cared about you, right?

Note: * I think it's when Shirotani was wondering why he cares

Shirotani: I don't want to hear it anymore.

Kurose: The reason why I fell for you is-...

Shirotani: I don't want to hear it.

[PAGE 08]

Kurose: ...Because of who you are, a mysophobic person.

Shirotani: Then..What would happen if you cure me? I won't matter anymore? ...Hahaha..

[PAGE 09]

Kurose: I like everything about you, your tenderness, your smile... People say, when you like someone,such are part of the reason 'to love'. It's not good enough?

Kurose: Whenever you feel grossed*, let it be only me who you accept*.

Kurose: And I mean, it's exactly when you are unbearably 'agitated'.*

Note: Very informal/blunt way of speech; also he is using 歪み which can mean 'to be bent'/'to get crooked'/'to be perverted'.

Note 02: By agitated he means when he gets horny and perverted; with a hard-on (Yes, he is being blunt now).

Kurose: You* alone are my ideal*.

Note: He is using a very endearing pronoun.

Note 02: The 'missing' piece of him; Mr. Right.

[PAGE 10]

Kurose: My very first confession and this one now, both are my sincere feelings.

Kurose: I don't want to hurt you, what I mean is.. I want you to feel good, I want to mess you/dirty you.

Kurose: All these feelings are engraved within me.

Kurose: I want to make you as twisted* as I am.

Note: Perverted/Dirty.

Memory flash (girl) : Disgusting.

[PAGE 11]

Shirotani: Don't touch me.

[PAGE 12]

Shirotani: It's disgusting.

[PAGE 13]

Kurose: Saying it's disgusting while having an erection..

SFX: Tightens grip around Shirotani's arms

Kurose: How any of this makes you different from me?

Shirotani: L-let go... Let me go,ple-..

Kurose: The only one who truly knows you is me.

Shirotani: LET ME GO, PLEASE!!

[PAGE 14]

SFX: Staggers/ Bumps into the door.

Shirotani: Ha...haaa...

[PAGE 15]

SFX: Slams

Shirotani running.

[PAGE 16]

Shirotani: Haa..haaa...

Memory flash: "I don't want to hurt Shirotani-san, what I mean is..."

Thoughts (Shirotani): *Don't mess around!

Note: Shirotani switches from his very polite and 'clean'/'proper' Japanese to a very blunt/rude speech. "All the fuck no's".

Thoughts (Shirotani): As I thought, up until now he just hated me and laughed in my face*

Note: The page is cut, but I think this is what he means.

Thoughts (Shirotani) : Why...why I didn't say that back then..*

Note: I guess he regrets not saying his true thoughts to Kurose.

[PAGE 17]

Shirotani: Haa...haaa...

Shirotani: Nnn..

SFX: Jolts

Shirotani is hard.

Thoughts: Doing it here...I'd rather die...Even with my mask on, it's unbearable to breath (in here).

[PAGE 18]

Thoughts: But elsewhere...I just...I just can't bear it...

Thoughts: First...I have to calm down...

Thoughts: But if I don't touch anything...it will be fine, won't it...?

[PAGE 19]

Thoughts: Not a single thing...

Thoughts: N-no...I just...can't do it..

Flash of memories (Kurose's words) : "And after I remove it, what do you want me to do? Shirotani-san can figure this out on his own, I believe."

[PAGE 20]

Shirotani pulls his pants down.

Thoughts: The gel is still there, it feels disgusting..

SFX: Trips

[PAGE 21]

Shirotani: Ah!

SFX: Touches the toilet seat.

Shirotani: Haa...haaa....haaaa...haaa

Note: It looks like he is about to hyperventilate

[PAGE 22]

Thoughts: What's the use of these gloves actually...

Flash of memories (Kurose's words) : "The only one who truly knows you is me."

Thoughts: ...Even though the one being dirty/stained/twisted is me...

 

 

 

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Edit:

Oh god. In the hurry I have seen 'yamenasai', when it is 'gomenasai' (I am sorry).

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Suida

Thanks for translating hmpf Kurose was just being honest.. hmm maybe a lil bit too honest...

 

As I thought, up until now he just hated me and laughed in my face*

damn why is he always thinking that -_-

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Thanks for the chapter and the translation!~~ cheetah10

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So it is related to his dad, after all.

But fact is, he is apologizing + he thinks he is the one stained/dirty.

I can't get why this chick made him watch this. I think his dad really had sex with her but...

why Shirotani is apologizing when even the father was in wrong? I mean, this is so fucked up. XD

 

And Kurose was right, it's only him that can cure him for he knows him the best.

 

You are welcome, yaoi4fans!

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I only saw now that you've used the same flower~ O___O Maybe Takarai Rihito-san is a member of YO and inspired for the new cover!~~~ cheetah14

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LMAO! Can you imagine! XDDDDDD.

If she is a member, hope she reads now this:

Please, do make Kurose loose his reasoning and pin him down.

You fight the poison with poison!

Though, I suggest to look like rape not! He should be forceful yet gentle. -nods-

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Suida

hmm he's feeling guilty because he jerked of while his father had sex and well he did something unethical so feeling disgusted with himself is just normal and that girl probably did that just out of boredom.. pretty messed up huh..

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Hmmm.

Though, his father is a teacher, yeah?

In Japan being a teacher is something considered as an honor.

If he loved him so dearly, which is seen from the bright memories he's got,

then the father wasn't one of these strict/cruel parents.

 

So Shirotani saw him as something idealistic, the perfect father.

Teacher, caring, intelligent, proper. No wonder his speech from the very beginning of Ten Count is so proper and beautiful.

Then the trauma is even bigger. No wonder he can't trust in Kurose's sincerity. Deep within he felt betrayed and yet disgusted with himself, that he betrayed the image of father-son, as well.

 

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Suida

Sensei is cunning as a fox.. i can imagine her with a very wicked grin on her face saying: just let them sneak a peak that should keep them busy for a while.. man this must be the paragon of psychological torture!

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What do you expect, XD!

Her (chosen pen) name is 'Rihito', 'logical/reasonable person'.

I am on her twitter now, and god. I so want that. =/

 

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Suida

that was an intense chapter.. there is this luscious Shirotani served on a silver plate and a hungry Kurose damn no one would succumb to such temptation don’t you think Kurose’s resistance is really astounding!!!…

Kurose is just cute saying things like "hey i love you because you have mysophobia and btw make me the center of your world so it’s easier for me to monopolize you :D That guy is killing me ;)

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Fuck. I just read someone's thoughts on what his phobia is based on, I quote:

He was in love with his father.

 

I seriously hope this person is just bad at assuming, XD.

 

Rather I am sure. Right? Come on, Rihito-sensei is not so twisted, XD.

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umm ok i must admit i was always wondering why he was turned on while his father had sex.. i mean come on who else would jerk off in this situation it’s kinda gross but that’s not the issue.. how old was he? Nine or Ten maybe.. so i blame puberty :D He can’t be in Love with his dad like

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said before it was just admiration.. i guess.. umm i hope :D

Maybe that girl was in Love with Shirotani's dad and she was just jealous because they had a special bond and just did that out of jealousy to show lil shiro that his dad belongs to her... maybe she is the key point..

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I found this, so cute, man!

Credits to 277k | tumblr.

 

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Suida

found this on tumblr ^^

 

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Source: uke-kun |tumblr.

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Suida

*sigh* the pic i've posted before isn't here anymore so i'll just post it again

 

 

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...that gaze..:OTL:

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Leslie_LC

Please feel free to check the Ten Count cosplay thread:

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^_^

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Suida

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yep me too ^^ one reason more to love him

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Saga

The new chapter was adorable, man!

I laughed when Shirotani reasoned why it was embarrassing XD!

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Suida

this is by far the best extra.. it’s short but soo ̶0̶̶0̶̶0̶ good and soo ̶0̶̶0̶̶0̶ dirty :Being-joyful:

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