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          #005 https://64.media.tumblr.com/65b86726fdca0ed84ea4dae730674d09/tumblr_inline_mr4h25bsMP1qz4rgp.gif February | One, two, three of us | word count 1500
                    theme https://64.media.tumblr.com/65b86726fdca0ed84ea4dae730674d09/tumblr_inline_mr4h25bsMP1qz4rgp.gif Trip Down On Memory Lane
                                words https://64.media.tumblr.com/65b86726fdca0ed84ea4dae730674d09/tumblr_inline_mr4h25bsMP1qz4rgp.gif paper, wind, box +soap

 

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Writing Challenge Accepted!

Month: February (2022)
Theme: Trip Down on Memory Lane
Words: Sponge, Seven, Play
Word count: 1500 words
Rating: 17+
Trigger warning: mentions of death, suicide, possible transmigration, mild smut

Title: In Loving Memory

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(Sorry for being late, but having a writer-block for the rest of the month is not the best thing. At some point, I was afraid of not making on time. So, it seems another month - another shoujo-styled entry...)

 

Writing challenge - Accepted and completed!

This month's(February's) theme: Trip Down on Memory Lane

3 given words: cologne, machine, guard

Word count: 1071

Title: Awaken Memories


 

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Okay, and let's see what do we have this month...

 

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: Oh, that's nice to see three drabbles of different pairings ^^

But I was surprised to learn that Tyler was in this kind of desperate situation in the past. Still, Elias was one of the better things which happened to them.

As for second drabble, my... it's kinda even touching to see how Donnovan's mother loves and accepts him no matter what, even if after such a difficult coming out.

As for the last one... Well, you cannot torn yourself apart, you have to pick either work and climbing the higher ladder in carrier, either love life. Yet, even if Jamie picked the work, still, it's not good reason for Jonah to cheat (I get it, different personalities, goals and etc. yet cheating is no good at all...). Hopefully, Jamie will find his true happiness even if it is not meant to have a relationship.

 

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: Oh, and I got surprised that it is in first-person POV again (sorry, just been recently replaying DMMD...)

Anyway, that's an interesting idea... Yup, never underestimate the power of subconsciousness! Yup, no wonder why people say that your subconsciousness speaks through the dreams. So, this one-shot really felt like Reincarnation AU or something like ''the lovers, who are destined to meet again no matter how much time may pass''.

So, I wonder what may happened if you haven't made the cuts in the final version...

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Oh, I love what you did with the theme. The last thing I was expecting was a fantastical take on it, but thinking about it, maybe I should have seen it coming (thinking about TBFL). Either way, I really love it, it's fresh and something else I can't put my finger on.

I don't have a lot of background on the characters (this is not a critique, I'm just saying it), but I liked how Quinn (another name I love, lol) and Lachlan found each other. I am also interested and curious about them. What kind of sorcery made them meet in another life too? What's going to happen next? Are they going to regain their past memories? I have so many questions! In such a short 1500 words story I'm completely taken with the characters and I want to know more about them.

And I really want to know what happened to Alistair and Logan, that bit of information about them jumping into the sea... What happened??

Apart from all the questions, I liked how Quinn wasn't weirded out by the 'dream', but wanted to spend some time with his grandma/sister, that was sweet. It was also sweet how he didn't know what to do regarding Logan, but their feelings led the way. Ah, I want to hug them.
The meeting at the end was perfect and I am glad they both remembered the same events (the amount of sex I'm sure they're going to have... gotta catch up, boys!).

I really enjoyed reading this, it's a both oddly sweet and interesting.

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Oh, hey! Evans is making an appearance again. And it seems I'm getting some background on the characters too. I think in my previous reply regarding this pairing I said something about them being secretive so I'm glad to get more info.

I liked how the events in the short story happen today, happy birthday, Jean!
Evans is so insecure, but I'm glad things seem to work out for him. Wondering if we'll get to read about their, dare I say, date too.

 

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I was surprised to learn that Tyler was in this kind of desperate situation in the past. Still, Elias was one of the better things which happened to them.

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It's actually the other way around. ^^

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Writing challenge - Accepted and completed!

This month's(March's) theme: Magic

3 given words: ball, copper, check

Word count: 1007

Title: A Little Sparkle of Magic

A little note: [Prequel to As a Gentle Wisteria's Touch...]

 

Some may say when you fall in love, you see nothing but only that special person, while everything else is in purple mist. Perhaps, for some, it feels like being under someone’s spell.

Or at least, this is how Ethan describes his caught feelings for John. Yet, it took a time long time before he admits to himself having feelings for his friend.

That’s right, not only the blond young man’s pleasant look, but his quick and talented hands work as mesmerizing charms.

Aside from never ceasing to amaze with how he mixes and prepares drinks, John has other talents. That's right, he can create the magic in his palm.

When the blond bartender has a free minute, he would pick a piece of paper, plastic cups, or other ordinary things and turn them into extraordinary ones.

For example, even by such simple tricks as turning water into tiny blocks of ice, making small objects to levitate, John can amaze his audience.

Sometimes, his magic skills can cheer up his best friend.

One time John told with a straight face that he can make a paper ball go through the counter.

Of course, Ethan objected that it was impossible. However, the blond wrapped the plastic cup in the paper. After hiding the paper ball under the cup, John smashed it with his fist.

Lastly, he revealed that the paper ball remained. It was followed by Ethan’s pointing out that this trick didn’t work. Yet, John asked whenever his friend was so sure.

Only after a minute or two, does Ethan realizes what was missing. Of course, it surprised him how his friend’s fist was so powerful that it made the plastic cup disappear.

Another example is his most recent trick. That’s right, Ethan had the worst day at work. So, as soon as his shift was over, he goes to a certain bar where his favorite bartender works.

After sitting down near the counter, he asks for his usual shot.

Seeing his friend so silent and upset concerns John. When he asks what happened, Ethan murmurs in a grumpy tone ‘‘Don’t ask, I messed up and that’s that stupid idiot’s fault. Whatever, I don’t wanna even think about it anymore. It’s nothing like it is important or anything.’’.

Of course, the dark-haired man keeps sulking, and it slowly gets on the bartender’s nerves. Yet, the long-haired blond patiently replies ‘‘Okay. If you don’t want to talk about it, that’s fine. But I’m sure that you’ll sort it out.’’.

When he takes the empty glass, John adds ‘‘Anyway, I have something for you.’’.
Ethan only suspiciously raises his eyebrow while staring. Surely, John cannot himself but smile at such an expression ‘‘Now, I’m sure that you would like it.’’.

After he picks up the empty box of chocolate, he hears Ethan’s grumpy question ‘‘And what am I supposed to do with that? You can throw it away by yourself.’’.

‘‘But I can refill it in no time. If you don’t believe me, I won’t share it with you.’’ John teases him.

‘‘Then, show it, pretty boy.’’ Ethan backfires as he cracks a smile.

‘It’s always so easy to distract you~’ or so, the blond thinks before starting another performance.

When he shows that both - the bottom and the box's lid are empty, there seems to be nothing to stand up or anything suspicious.

After John closes the box, he casts a silent spell.

Meanwhile, Ethan carefully observes his friend and wonders how he will pull this trick.

Before the bartender opens the lid, he speaks up ‘‘If you still don’t believe, let me prove you wrong. So, why don’t we check it out?’’.

Surprisingly, the box is full of assorted chocolates.

‘‘How is it possible? What did you do?’’ Ethan comments as he points with his palm at the box.

‘‘Magicians never tell their secrets, Ethan.’’ John declares in a proud tone. ‘‘But wait! There is something behind your ear.’’ He adds.

‘‘When did it?-’’ He couldn’t finish the sentence as he feels how his friend move his palm toward him. At this moment, Ethan’s cheeks dye in a darker tone of red, and he cannot process what is happening.

However, as soon as the blond with-draws his palm, he shows a copper coin in his fingers. Lastly, he adds in an innocent tone ‘‘I wonder how did it get there~’’.

‘Perhaps this man does not know about his bewitching charms. Otherwise, he won’t be doing this. That’s for sure…’ Or so, Ethan convinces himself while staring in awe.

In the meantime, the blond bartender snaps his fingers a few times ‘‘Are you okay? You are sure that you haven’t caught a cold?’’. Gladly, it returns his friend to this world.

When Ethan blinks and shakes his head, he tries to sound as chill as he could ‘‘Er… It’s nothing! I swear.’’. After a brief pause, he continues in a slightly shy tone ‘‘And thanks, man… Anyway, I need to go now. I don’t wanna make Christine worry.’’.

Before leaving his seat, his friend’s voice stops him ‘‘You forgot something.’’.

Ethan instantly turns back and checks inside his jacket and jeans pockets.

As John gives him a warm look, he gives him the box of chocolates ‘‘Here you go. You can have them, or you can give them to your girlfriend. Ah, and be careful on your way.’’.

While Ethan holds the box close to his heart, he lowers his gaze as he murmurs something under his nose. After he turns around, he leaves the bar.

One thing is sure, it was close enough before John figured out everything.

‘That handsome devil… You have no idea what you’re doing to me.’ The dark-haired man tells himself.

Despite that, he decides to keep the chocolates for himself. After all, it is like an unexpected gift.

However, instead of rushing to finish these chocolates, Ethan wants to save them for as long as possible. Lastly, he would keep the box as it was the most precious thing in this world.

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          #006 image March | Magic? | word count 1500
                    theme image Magic
                                words image hoax, burger, gem

 

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image The mentioned stone in the story is a Ruby Zoisite.
image The Abhartach is a dwarf from Irish folklore that terrorised people and was killed by the village's chieftain. The Abhartach returned and was killed again until the chieftain buried him upside down. In a version of the story, the Abhartach is said to be a vampire.


 

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Writing Challenge Accepted!

Month: March (2022)
Theme: Magic
Words: Card, Wand, Rabbit
Extra word: Violin
 
Word count: 1426 words
Rating: G
Trigger warning: Cringe (lol)

Title: He's a super-magician now??

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Okay, it seems that for today I only have enough of strength to read and review your entries. I'm sorry, but yesterday I had a night-shift, and today I still feel like having a head full of cotton and nothing else

A-anyway, I will check tomorrow you feedbacks because rn my I can it's no good in current state... So, hopefully, brief reviews could do this time


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Writing Challenge Accepted!

Month: April (2022)
Theme: The result wasn't exactly gold medal-worthy
Words: bruise, prize, clumsy
Extra word: vine
Word count: 1438 words
Rating: NSFW 18+
Trigger warning: Smut, full-on intercourse ahead! Readers be warned!

Title: Winning a bet (and losing at the same time)

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Writing challenge - Accepted and completed!

 

 

This month's(April's) theme: The result wasn’t exactly gold medal-worthy

3 given words: rainbow, pot, sparrow

Word count: 1069

Title:Maybe It Wasn't a Missing Shot...

 

(okay, this theme was a bit difficult, but on the last days of this month, I figure out what to do. More so, someone couldn't concentrate at all)

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          #007 image April | Birthday Intentions | word count 1035
                    theme image The result wasn't exactly gold medal-worthy.
                                words image burp, ulcer, wheelbarrow

 

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          image I did not organise well this month so I'm super late, sorry about that.
          image The story is a disaster through and through. Didn't properly edit it as I just finished writing.

 

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Okay, it seems that this month's feedbacks are a bit of late ^^''

A-anyway, let me add the quick reviews before seeing what the new month has to offer.


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Sorry for the super late review. I think I'm biting more than I can chew with a number of commitments that demand my attention, but here's my feedback for previous challenge before we start posting the new short stories!

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Writing challenge - Accepted and completed!



This month's(May's) theme: Kabedon

3 given words: battle, insect, swap

Word count: 1013

Title: Who could have seen this coming?


 

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Writing Challenge Accepted!

Month: May (2022)
Theme: Kabedon (scene description)
Words: languid, king, scene
Word count: 1450 words
Rating: G
Trigger warning: Slight mention of eating disorder, possible gay stereotype

Title: Try it first

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          #008 image May | Want a drink? | word count 1371
                    theme image Kabedon
                                words image rose, smirk, daring +murky

 

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Okay, and it is time for the feedbacks!~

So, let's see...

 

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Let's do our best in the nest challenge!

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