Saga Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 In a few days I have a birthday. To be honest,the most unexpected things turn to be real and memorable - forever. I didn't plan neither the drawing,or the poem. But I want to see my last drawing and poem when I am like this - 20 years old,between the optimism,pessimism and realism. Me,myself and I - proud of what is behind me and what is ahead of me,as my ideal,my goal,my dream. Yes,that's why on my bishie's cheek there is a mark ''20". (: Last words -pause- Life is time. °•Life is Time•° People say, we are born from stars and die with the falling ones. I say, we are born from hopes and die with ones. A question we learnt at school, never knew we'd keep asking it in a row - ''Why''. But as I stood above all, heard a vow, I see what it feels to call it low. To master time, we have a whole lifetime, but sadly what it costs is the same, the same it requested - ''Time''. Edges and ages, we all walk down on the road, we all see the same - Hopes and Despair. And today, same as yesterday, I want to vow to no one but myself . I want bow to no one but myself. I won to no one but myself. I say to no one but you - ''Life is Time, Time is You.'' A Stranger Struggling in Time 29th of June,2012 P.S. What a funny thing, while typing it, a song called ''Timeless'' played on background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 It's beautiful, great poem sweetie... And yeah, definitely shows the melancholy of someone who's facing a change in their lives. I love the title... Life is time, definitely. We live thru time, and need time to live. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted June 29, 2012 Author Share Posted June 29, 2012 Thank you,sweetness! I am glad you agreed and liked my improvisation. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 This is my fave part, the big truth to me.. To master time, we have a whole lifetime, but sadly what it costs is the same, the same it requested - ''Time''. Bu I'd have chosen this as title: A Stranger Struggling in Time , as I see it, that's life... Good work, as usual... happy end of the 20s... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karin Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 I liked both the poem and the drawing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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