Saga Posted June 29, 2012 Posted June 29, 2012 In a few days I have a birthday. To be honest,the most unexpected things turn to be real and memorable - forever. I didn't plan neither the drawing,or the poem. But I want to see my last drawing and poem when I am like this - 20 years old,between the optimism,pessimism and realism. Me,myself and I - proud of what is behind me and what is ahead of me,as my ideal,my goal,my dream. Yes,that's why on my bishie's cheek there is a mark ''20". (: Last words -pause- Life is time. °•Life is Time•° People say, we are born from stars and die with the falling ones. I say, we are born from hopes and die with ones. A question we learnt at school, never knew we'd keep asking it in a row - ''Why''. But as I stood above all, heard a vow, I see what it feels to call it low. To master time, we have a whole lifetime, but sadly what it costs is the same, the same it requested - ''Time''. Edges and ages, we all walk down on the road, we all see the same - Hopes and Despair. And today, same as yesterday, I want to vow to no one but myself . I want bow to no one but myself. I won to no one but myself. I say to no one but you - ''Life is Time, Time is You.'' A Stranger Struggling in Time 29th of June,2012 P.S. What a funny thing, while typing it, a song called ''Timeless'' played on background.
Belita Posted June 29, 2012 Posted June 29, 2012 It's beautiful, great poem sweetie... And yeah, definitely shows the melancholy of someone who's facing a change in their lives. I love the title... Life is time, definitely. We live thru time, and need time to live.
Saga Posted June 29, 2012 Author Posted June 29, 2012 Thank you,sweetness! I am glad you agreed and liked my improvisation. (:
BRIDGET Posted June 29, 2012 Posted June 29, 2012 This is my fave part, the big truth to me.. To master time, we have a whole lifetime, but sadly what it costs is the same, the same it requested - ''Time''. Bu I'd have chosen this as title: A Stranger Struggling in Time , as I see it, that's life... Good work, as usual... happy end of the 20s...
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