Unforgettable night

[Bloodysadist]

(Okay...I tried to write something,but...I don't it became as good as I wanted it to be. XD)

 

Steps coming from behind,

Strong and manly aroma.

Gently touch,

Feeling his breath on the neck.

 

A tongue touching the skin.

Teeth softly biting this beautiful neck.

Mixed feelings.

The test of blood and chocolate.

 

Silk quilts,

Sweat mixed with blood.

The love is all over the room.

Every single movement.

Every single breath.

Every beat of the heart can be heard.

 

This unforgettable night,

full with love and passion,

fear and desire,

everything is so mixed,

like their blood tonight.

[~Mitsukuni~]

really nice poem Bloody, i like it

lol is it me.. or are you just getting better and better? XDD

[BRIDGET]

Strong poem dear..full of passion ... I liked it a lot, really...to me..on of the best up till now...

[Bloodysadist]

@Mitsu better and better on writing or? XDD And I'm really glad that you liked it. ^^

 

@Bridge Waa so at least it can be felt what I wanted to express? (I mean the passion feeling XD) And thanks for the words dear. ^^

[~Mitsukuni~]

@Bloody

lol yeah i meant the writing ^__^

your welcome dear~

[Saga]

-stares- Wet dreams,bud? XD Joking,joking.

I like it. (: You should write a poem for me.;D

[jo_suzaku]

Nicely written (=