+Six Steps+

[Saga]

Silver dreams

bathed into a crimson sin.

Feelings thrown into a bin.

What's the use of dreaming,

when you keep eyes trapped

in your sweet sleeping?

Step one, never been so fleeting.

 

Breathes turned into sighs,

what could I create except lies?

You knocked it down,

I just picked it up.

You broke it down,

please,let me dream

before the dawn.

Step two,my own flaw.

 

White lotus open,

glances stolen,

wounds swollen,but

pride woken.

Step three, forgotten.

 

Voiceless wish,

in a lake, like a goldfish,

heart skips to punish.

Please, let be selfish.

Step four, let it banish.

 

Before the fingers let go,

memories from long ago.

My shattered ego,

grabbing onto the arrow

of your long forgotten wallow.

Step five, do a fucken hallow.

 

And for the typecast,

gotta beat this rhyme fast.

Heart never been so vast,

to let you in and let you B-pass.

What a a shame for my Past.

Boy, you did a good move for me to surpass.

And if you wonder,

this is my Sixth step of heart like a sand-blast.

[Bloodysadist]

Wow...Without words :X :X It's...hah..just as you said : P

[BRIDGET]

Oscar Wilde once said....

“A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.”

Awesome.....

[Saga]

Thank you,girls. (:

[shirotsuki]

it is... i can't even describe it...

Thank you so much for this moment... i think my soul left my body for a minute there...

my congrats! such talent...

[Saga]

Wow, I am glad you liked it,really. (: Didn't know it can have such an effect. -chuckles-

[shirotsuki]

Art in general has that effect on me...

Good art of course!

 

And i really meant what i said! you do have so much talent... keep it up! ^^

[nicicia]

Oh my...this is...I think this is actually quite brilliant! I really like it! I usually don't read poems, but I sensed awesomeness coming from this direction, so naturally, I had to investigate. XD

 

Ever so talented, Saga

[Saga]

Oh my...this is...I think this is actually quite brilliant! I really like it! I usually don't read poems, but I sensed awesomeness coming from this direction, so naturally, I had to investigate. XD

 

Ever so talented, Saga

Ahahah,admit that you stalk me. ;D ;D Joking. Thank you very much,Nic. (: