Saga Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 Something lost I sit there,staring at the life itself My hand reaches for a cigarette. "Wait,wait, are you okay?" A pause made for a glance. "Ah,it's you,kiddo. Long time no see." Shivering are the branches outside, whipping the wind that can't give up. A sound made for a chuckle out of the bitterness,in into the Utopia. "Are you lost again?" The darkness ripped by a single flick of this lighter. "And I thought I erased you." A gentle hand,yet colder than Death "If you erase me who would remind you." Bitter glance for the truth, a push to the edge,where? "Remind me what?" Smoke spiraling out of mouth, lungs shivering for the last. "Who you really are." Drops falling to caress the glass, "You and your Hope." Flick of a brow,put of a mask. "You and your Depression." A surprise drummed down, vivid memories spinning now. "You've changed." A quick caress on my hair, a small laughter in my ears. "Not me,but you." A squeeze between lips, what of a bliss? "My,my,children shouldn't play with fire." A long white wing covers my eyes. "Repeat it to understand it." Fragile is the sound, shattered by the wind's whisper. "Are you calling me a kid?" A cocky smile on lips, eyes blinded by wings. "Fly when you can't dream." Last call for a smile, yet a bitter smile. "Lost my wings,kiddo." A warm feeling in my heart, what is it about? "You liar." A child play, an elder prey. "Back to reality,huh?" Faster and faster, heart is about to burst. "Fly when you can't dream." "Stubborn." "Just like you." "Taking over?" "Saving you from the over." "Gamer." "Minder." "Ahahah." "Think about it,kiddo." A switched role, something lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 I'll just shut my mouth this time...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 If I have to correct one more typo...I will....throw myself out the window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 I'll just shut my mouth this time...... LOL,is it so bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 No.... frigging i...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 Um... >_>' Okay, got it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kisaru Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 Is it wrong of me to say that I thought that was beautifully written? >>; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 Um... >_>' Okay, got it... No great art has ever been made without the artist having known danger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 No great art has ever been made without the artist having known danger. Well said,dear. (: Is it wrong of me to say that I thought that was beautifully written? >>; You think so? (: I think I am going mental ;D ;D But, it's been awhile since I've written such a type of...whatever it is called. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kisaru Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 I really do! O_O It's fantastic. ...And I AM mental, so welcome to the club! My poetry isn't nearly this good. ...It's severely demented, as is..most...everything I write. -Sweatdrops- I swear my inner self is a sadist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 I really do! O_O It's fantastic. ...And I AM mental, so welcome to the club! My poetry isn't nearly this good. ...It's severely demented, as is..most...everything I write. -Sweatdrops- I swear my inner self is a sadist. ;D I am the sadism itself. XDDDD LOL! Well,I have my moments of brutality as well, lol! Thank you once again. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kisaru Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 Haha, wonderful XD And you're very welcome~! I'm curious as to what people would think of what I write...then again I don't want to scare the friends I've made here so far. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 Haha, wonderful XD And you're very welcome~! I'm curious as to what people would think of what I write...then again I don't want to scare the friends I've made here so far. XD We are a friendly community Kisaru.. so don't be afraid... we are all a bunch of crazy ppl... and it's always nice to have a new writer..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kisaru Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 I'm always nervous to see what people think about my work. ...Cept for my editor, seeing as he's used to my inner twisted mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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