BRIDGET Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 A piece of cellophane makes life a kaleidoscope. Dark and light colors mixed in memories ready to torture. Cold and warm hues intertwined in feelings pushing a heart to a break. Black colors in hollow nights, Hunting, hurting, breaking les petits rêves de une pettite marionette brisée. Leaving inedible bruises on the skin making a twisted heart even twistier. Far Blue colors lightens the darkness without love, without hope but tenderness. Metallic Greens in silent, long witching hours blends with purple and gray sorrows in search for a world to love and be loved by. Fast brushes of bright, sparkling Reds, Pinks, Oranges, Yellows, bringing timid smiles and heart laughter to the black well where a soul rests waiting for the purest white to cover the black..... 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 Heh,wonderful and beautiful. "les petits rêves de une petite marionette brisée.",I can see the accent falling over it. Knowing it's a romantic language,yet the meaning gives 'being lost in the pink' feeling. Even darted with the color you used,dear. (: Even the words giving a colorful feeling,still on the background the dark plays its role. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 8, 2011 Author Share Posted November 8, 2011 There is no real meaning in the color used for the letters, dear, just an accidental choice... Glad you like it, I feel flattered coming from you.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cherryyuri Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 i like it bridget! Im surounded by talented friends! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 There is no real meaning in the color used for the letters, dear, just an accidental choice... Glad you like it, I feel flattered coming from you.... Well, accidental choices make the life itself. ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 Aw,Bridge~! The poem is so good...Full with beauty. :X 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 8, 2011 Author Share Posted November 8, 2011 Well, accidental choices make the life itself. ;P Tell me, I was going to be a Literature Teacher & now I've to learn Modern Art & Business...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 Aw,Bridge~! The poem is so good...Full with beauty. :X I'm glad you liked it, Bloody, thanks..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 Loved it Bridge... You're coming up with such great writting The french phrase gave it a really sweet romantic touch... *__* Very very good :** 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 Loved it Bridge... You're coming up with such great writting The french phrase gave it a really sweet romantic touch... *__* Very very good :** Well I think that it's not that good, just a silly thing, but as always thanks Bel, your words always mean a lot.... The Romantic thing... well I think it can be helped when I spend most of my time reading Percy Shelly or Jonh Keats- Highly recommended.... hehhehe..... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 I love this poem, as everything you've written so far... It's romantic, sad, but with a trace of hope in the end and very visual, it just makes you see the kaleidoscope in front of your eyes 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 I love this poem, as everything you've written so far... It's romantic, sad, but with a trace of hope in the end and very visual, it just makes you see the kaleidoscope in front of your eyes Thanks my dear, for everything. I'm happy you liked it, even these days where the Kaleidoscope is quite gray, I still hope colors come back to my life one day.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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