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A piece of cellophane

makes life a kaleidoscope.

Dark and light colors mixed

in memories ready to torture.

Cold and warm hues intertwined

in feelings pushing a heart to a break.

Black colors in hollow nights,

Hunting, hurting, breaking

les petits rêves de une pettite marionette brisée.

Leaving inedible bruises on the skin

making a twisted heart even twistier.

Far Blue colors lightens the darkness

without love, without hope but tenderness.

Metallic Greens in silent, long witching hours

blends with purple and gray sorrows

in search for a world to love and be loved by.

Fast brushes of bright, sparkling

Reds, Pinks, Oranges, Yellows,

bringing timid smiles and heart laughter

to the black well where a soul rests

waiting for the purest white to cover the black.....

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Heh,wonderful and beautiful.

"les petits rêves de une petite marionette brisée.",I can see the accent falling over it.

Knowing it's a romantic language,yet the meaning gives 'being lost in the pink' feeling. Even darted with the color you used,dear. (:

Even the words giving a colorful feeling,still on the background the dark plays its role.

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There is no real meaning in the color used for the letters, dear, just an accidental choice...

Glad you like it, I feel flattered coming from you....

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i like it bridget! Im surounded by talented friends!

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There is no real meaning in the color used for the letters, dear, just an accidental choice...

Glad you like it, I feel flattered coming from you....

 

Well, accidental choices make the life itself. ;P

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Aw,Bridge~! The poem is so good...Full with beauty. :X

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Well, accidental choices make the life itself. ;P

 

Tell me, I was going to be a Literature Teacher & now I've to learn Modern Art & Business......

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Aw,Bridge~! The poem is so good...Full with beauty. :X

 

I'm glad you liked it, Bloody, thanks.....

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Loved it Bridge...

You're coming up with such great writting ;)

The french phrase gave it a really sweet romantic touch... *__*

 

Very very good :**

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Loved it Bridge...

You're coming up with such great writting ;)

The french phrase gave it a really sweet romantic touch... *__*

 

Very very good :**

 

Well I think that it's not that good, just a silly thing, but as always thanks Bel, your words always mean a lot....

 

The Romantic thing... well I think it can be helped when I spend most of my time reading Percy Shelly or Jonh Keats-

Highly recommended.... hehhehe.....

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I love this poem, as everything you've written so far... It's romantic, sad, but with a trace of hope in the end and very visual, it just makes you see the kaleidoscope in front of your eyes

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I love this poem, as everything you've written so far... It's romantic, sad, but with a trace of hope in the end and very visual, it just makes you see the kaleidoscope in front of your eyes

Thanks my dear, for everything. I'm happy you liked it, even these days where the Kaleidoscope is quite gray, I still hope colors come back to my life one day....

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