Last words

[Bloodysadist]

(Uh...its my first time trying to write something like that in English..So..I'm sorry if its not good..or..there have mistakes..)

 

Looking at the closed window,

what do you see?

The dark sky at the night?

Or the moon,but without the light?

Wanna tell me these hurtful words again?

"I don't love you,I'm sorry","I will leave you,can you forgive me?"

 

Wasn't that enough?

My heart is already broken on pieces.

I can't see the light on the end of the tunnel.

I can't hear my own breath.

Am I alive?

I'm asking you,AM I ALIVE?

 

You are happy now,

with your new life,don't even remembering that,

one year ago,you leaved this empty soul.

But I'll come back.

Yeah,you heard me! I'll come back,

to show you that I'm alive.

 

I'll say you like you did,

"I'm sorry,but I can't stand you now"

"I don't care,for your new life"

"I hate you" will be my last words.

[BRIDGET]

Beautiful poem, Bloody, full of feelings. It seems that we share a lot of things ne??

[cherryyuri]

such a talented baby student! =]

[Bloodysadist]

@Bridget:Thank you dear...^^ Uh,yeah..sharing a lot of things...Indeed XD

 

@Cherry: Aw,thank you Cherry-chan.. ^^'' But...I'm not that good...XDD

[rotten boy]

HI Bloody Love the poem. Kind the way I felt with my ex.

[Bloodysadist]

@Rotten boy Ah...thank you,for reading it XDDD And...believe me I can understand what do you mean ^^''

[Belita]

Is this really your first time?! O_o

It's great...really doesn't look like it *__*

 

It's really good Bloody

[Bloodysadist]

Bela: Uh..well I tried once before O-o I think..but dunnoh...I'm just worry about my English...So I don't usually write something like this one XD

 

Thank you dear,really~ ^_^

[Miro]

The poem is so beatiful! leaf4 Hope you'll write other poems as well!

[Matti_19]

I like your poem, even if it's sad. We are waiting for a happy poem as well.

[Bloodysadist]

@Miro Thank you dear ^^'' I promise I'll write something when I have muse XD

 

@Matti Heh,cutie I'll try to write something happy and sweet special for you : P

[~Mitsukuni~]

Your English is great Bloody!, that was a really nice poem ^^ please make more. :hamtaro-005 (23):

[YAO(H)I_lover]

You're amazing! I really liked it

[Bloodysadist]

Thank you Mitsu and Yaoi(H)I_lover ^_^ I'm glad that you liked it : P