Let's meet again

[Saga]

Life might be bad,

I might be mad,

but I am going on my own "I road".

 

 

 

You who knew how to smile at me

made me believe in my existence.

You who knew how to cry

made me realize my existence.

You , now, who are you?

 

 

 

I might be sad,

You might be glad,

but let's meet again in the end of my "I road".

 

 

 

The gentleness of these cold snowflakes,

ah, how my heart begs

Fingertips that does not know how to caress,

I am reaching out for you.

Yes,yes - Let's meet again.

I haven't showed you anything yet.

Will you smile at the current me?

These thoughts run through my conscious,

spiraling around my breathe like thorns -

What can I do?

 

 

 

Life might be bad,

I might be mad,

but I am going on my own "I road".

 

 

 

Do you remember the wind playing with our hairs?

You were laughing at my silly face

and this feeling in me...."Ah, this is it, our farewell."

I smiled for last time, but you didn't realize it.

 

 

I might be sad,

You might be glad,

but let's meet again in the end of my "I road".

Let me show you how great I can be for you to regret, my dear friend.

[Bloodysadist]

:X :X Sad..and In the same time so beautiful :X Hahaha,I feel many feelings in the poem,am I right?

[Saga]

Indeed,my bud. (: This is my 'I road'. (:

[Bloodysadist]

A,so. Interesting ^^

[Aoi]

Very beautiful your poem! I like it a lot

[Saga]

Thank you, Aoi. (:

[hama71]

 

I did with out asking you for it...

But, I thought this poem will go well with this background...

This is from Nana fan site...

I hope you like it... ^^

[Saga]

It's beautiful. (:

I don't mind.

[GPelka]

@ Saga :

So beautiful... I like it.... It reminded me something and....

You have to give me a box of tissues.. :|... loll

 

@ Hama71 :

I like the image you chose.. PERFECT !!

[YAO(H)I_lover]

I like it a lot! A very beautiful poem...and somehow I can relate to it.

[Saga]

@GPelka - Ah, I am glad you liked it,sweetness. (:

@YAO(H)I_lover - Thank you! (:

[Belita]

A lot of feelings poured in there... I loved it...

 

Congratts it's great...Really

[panda16]

sad poem but I like the sad poems

[Rei]

Very beautiful! Awesome poem! In fact I loved both the poem and the way Hama chose the pic... it matches so well!

[Saga]

Yes, they do. Thank you,Rei. (:

[BRIDGET]

But, I thought this poem will go well with this background...

This is from Nana fan site...

I hope you like it... ^^

 

You're always doing so great things with these guys poems!

[BRIDGET]

Awesome! I liked it very much, bitter but with a bit of hope for the speaker, I like the refrain & the way you alternate words with similar sounds, I also like the distribution of the stanzas .

I like the most these two verses

"Will you smile at the current me?

These thoughts run through my conscious,"

I wonder that a lot too

Congrats, really, I liked it very much...

[Saga]

I guess, these,who can feel literature and these born with the talent to feel the art can tell, there is a hope in the bitterness. (:

Thank you,dear.

[BRIDGET]

I guess, these,who can feel literature and these born with the talent to feel the art can tell, there is a hope in the bitterness. (:

Thank you,dear.

Really beautiful, I think bitterness is sth that makes us feel alive as well as hope....

Thanks to you for this piece....

[lilredphoenix]

Some of the best poetry can be thought up and created when emotions or feelings are at its highest peak. A reader can almost "feel" what the author was experiencing at the moment. Powerful expressions of words Saga, hope you continue to share with us more of your masterpieces.

[rotten boy]

LOve the poem realy is sad but happy.