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Holy Sh** what did i just read XD i wasn't prepared for lines like

 

Gin could tell how big and hard Death was. For a moment he reassured himself that they won't get weird holes filled….

 

or

 

he could wet the abused entrance

 

no words needed just only thing... Gin you lucky bastard!

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Wait wut? cheetah16 I'm knocked out, completely and totally!!~~ cheetah10 This was too hoooot!!!~~~ cheetah14

  • 4 weeks later...
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a short but very intense chapter... the pain is so much more intense...

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Amazing! You never fail to surprise us with each chapter. ^_^

  • 2 weeks later...
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Now and then I wonder, why I have to reap when everyone desires life?

That part made me sob!~~ cheetah7

  • 4 weeks later...
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It made me so sad! cheetah7

 

The part where Lucifer tried to kiss Kou was hawt!~~~ cheetah16

  • 7 months later...
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A new chapter! Woohoo! :Excited:

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I thought for a moment that he will decide to take the girl to her mommy. :leaf8:

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I had to catch up with the last few chapters as I somehow missed them. ^_^ The story has turned very unexpected, at least for me and for some reason I am starting to fear this won't finish with a happy ending. >_>" I can't wait for the next one! ^_^

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Amazing chapter! Emotional, amusing, sad. All in all, lovely. ^_^

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Thank you all for reading the first part of Shi no Zetsubou, 50SoD.

I will be shortly opening the second part of this fiction as a new release (think of it like first book, and then second book).

Also, I will be opening a poll about the second part's title. I'd like you to pick the most fitting name for it.

Regarding how it ended in first part, I'd like to hear your thoughts. Oh, and don't keep the things you didn't like to yourself! XD.

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