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This month theme shall be
F A L L E N

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it.

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

the word 'F A L L E N' in the content.

 

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  • Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

  • No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.

  • Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

  • Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.

  • The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

  • Post the final result on this thread.

  • Read the rules again, just in case.

 

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  • Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

  • The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 F A L L E N themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

 

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Starts:
09.07.2013

Ends:
31.07.2013

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I CLOSE MY EYES

 

 

 

 

I close my eyes

and see cherry trees in bloom,

everything is destined to end

without an end nothing would make sense.

 

I close my eyes,

and see the sun in your eyes,

that slowly is dying,

 

I see drops of light,

fallen from my eyes

that gather in puddles of life.

 

I pray you,

come to me now,

and then, free me!

 

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Keep Walking

 

 

Till this day I remember

your touch

your kiss

your warm embrace.

 

It's unforgetable, because how could one forget such

bitter sweet love that set the storms in

my heart to rest.

 

A wise man once said all hearts are meant to connect,

But i'ts not possible to connect when ones mind is not set straight.

 

An overwhelming impulse strikes my heart

As I remember the day you said goodbye.

Truth is I can't move forward, because I'm a coward.

So I'll keep walking with my broken,fallen,beaten heart

until I see you again.

 

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For You

 

From grace

From Heaven

From all that lives within the hearts of men

Fallen

 

Your song is fallen angels

Doves and demons

How is it Hell plays bass so well?

That sadness low and deep and slow

Beating underneath it all.

 

Fallen

From love

And still the song plays on an on

Like waves on the shore

Reaching always for something more

 

Dark eyes closed tight

Heart closed tighter

But you never forget the music

As you fall

And fall

And

fall

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No more

 

 

 

 

 

 

It still remains.….

I’m walking through the rain….

Why it can’t be refrained?

When it’ll be drained?

Out of you who I rely on……….

 

 

Don’t wanna be only your friend

Can’t you see my pain?

Crazy for you now and then….

Like runaway train…

Notice me, into your eyes…

 

 

Oh no, no way

I won’t let you see me cry,

So please, do pass me by,

I am here full of my pride,

I just don’t want to hide,

My soul & mind are sliding away

 

Since the day we’ve met

My heart’s warm in a shed

Our hearts is like a thread

Can you interpret?

How much you mean to me?

 

 

So well…

All the tears will let me free

No sadness, no guilty…

No more stories from you and me

It is the end…

For our lives to go on……

 

 

 

 

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Bird's life

 

When I was a child I dreamed about my prince who would come to save me.

But the years went by and left nothing but hatred, pain and sadness.

 

I am a pure bird, wanting and needing the freedom.

 

Everything I've got was painful and cruel. So I started to search for you again.

My false princes...there were so many I can't count.

Please catch me if you can. Come into my loving heart.

 

But every time again my wings got broken as my heart, too.

"Is there someone who wants to fill my empty, shredded heart with love?"

I can't see nor hear anymore but I know somewhere there you are looking at my fallen, weak body.

 

It's too cruel to think about it… To remember but still everything burnt into my mind.

Deep in myself I feel the wounds bleeding… in each hurting place.

When can I wake up again?

If I could find you, with which voice will I talk to you? Which face will you make?

 

Please cut out my memoires

I can feel the breeze and I wish to be as cold as the wind.

I hate myself that I can't forgive myself but I can't go back again.

 

Why waiting day by day?

Lonely as a broken toy I am still waiting for you.

"Break my wings again", I thought still smiling bitterly. I know how to live in this cage.

 

Surrounded by dust, dirt and insects I am still smiling softly...laughing because I went mad.

 

 

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Fallen angel:

 

I was searching all my Life,

For an angel fallen from the sky.

I walked thru all the countries,

That are deviding the pepole on this earth.

 

And after all those years of searching I finally found you

I remember thinking

“I cant belive its true and angel here on earth and that angel is you*

 

For years we were togheter,

Togheter thru it all

I remember that I was hoping that the day would never come the day that you would leave me,

The day that I’d be all alone.

 

And now I sit beside you

As you draw your final breath

An angel fallen from the heaven

Has gone back again

 

Sometimes when In our house

I think I hear your voice.

But then I realise that Im dreaming and that you are really gone.

 

I know that Im just dreaming that you are in our house

But I cant help that im dreaming because you were in my Life

 

And now that I am dying

I smile my final smile

Because soon Im in your arms again.

Somewhere in the sky

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Title : Wind

 

You come You gone Without warning

All your presence You warmth Your feeling

I sense them all

 

The petals blow throughout the sky my heart dance

'Cause I know u are happy

When u blow strongly take along with the rain

My heart cry along with your tears

 

I can't touch you I can't see you

But I still know you are here

Your presence Your care Your warmth

I sense them all

Even you're exhausted You still give me a blow to stand the heat

 

You are my breath You are my strength

Your are my everything

I'm FALLEN into your Blow deeply.

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Heartbreak Triangle

I can see it in your eyes

When she walks into the room

Like an old habit

Your eyes still follow her

 

You still whisper her name in your sleep

You still look at her with sad eyes

As if your world has fallen apart

It breaks my heart

 

I don’t want to drown in your eyes

I don’t want to hold your hand

Because in the end

She’s still the one you want

 

But I don’t want to keep doing this

We’re just hurting each other

We’re in a heartbreak triangle

 

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The Last Goodbye

 

I´m walking through the path.

I know what will I see at the end.

But I don´t want to think about it.

Maybe it´s not true.

 

Maybe I´m only dreaming.

But deep inside my heart I know it´s reality.

And I know I can´t change it.

There, I can see lying person.

 

It´s YOU.

I´m afraid to look.

No life, no colour in your face.

No breath, no smile.

 

You are gone, gone.

I can´t see through my tears.

My heart will stop from the pain.

How can I live when you are gone?

 

I´m standing only standing.

You have gone somewhere I can´t reach you.

Will I ever smile again?

Will I ever be happy?

 

Why? Why? Why you?

That´s repeating in my head.

But I know you are free now.

I´m glad you wouldn´t suffer more.

 

But my heart is still torn apart.

I touch your cheek.

It´s cold, cold.

I´m fallen, fallen dark being.

 

I will be the same old dark person.

The person I used to be.

This is my last goodbye.

This is my last goodbye, goodbye.

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Sadistic Serenade

I see that your wings are already broken

Still, I can't move and just sitting in quiet watching you struggling

Somehow, it's feels so good for me

 

You fighting and try to flapping your wings

Whatever you did, just like a fool

Are that you can't see your broken wings behind you?

It was painful isn't it?

 

You never try to ask why and just letting me watching you

I never try to ask why and just sitting watching you in pain

I love the fact you can't fly

 

You will never flying through the sky

Dancing with the wind and joy

Because whatever you did

I'll make sure that you will fallen again

 

Just like I always do

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My submission to the Fallen Music Box contest:

 

 

The life of a romanticist

 

00:18

The life of a romanticist

Is not one of trifle

often a heart paired with a rifle

Feelings of love that persist

 

00:43

A twisted fate for one truly jaded

 

00:47

Pearls before swine

Return whats mine

Fallen love is scorned

A broken heart is mourned

Will this be

For eternity

Roam this world alone

Weeds seen overgrown

 

01:26

I...

Spread my wings

Lock my heart tight

Cause the pain stings

Insatiable appetite

Something that wont go right

Consumes me at twilight

Ephemeral delight

 

02:10

Years seem to fly

 

02:21

But the harder I try

Still yearning for your touch against my neck

 

02:41

Laying a teary wreck

 

Recorded demo of the song can be found

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Vocals are not that fantastic, actually attempted singing on a day where I found myself having difficulties with my breathing. Was unable to hold a note for long without losing my breath and the strain in my voice was evident.

 

In essence... The vocals SUCK but help for visualising the song I wrote :p

 

 

Hope you like!

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku FALLEN Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku FALLEN Contest] is Nephilim with

their song lyrics 'For You'.

 

As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

▦▦ Application for Spring themed Set ▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

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O.O I'm feeling really shy right now with this. I looked at all the messages a couple times and my name's still on them so I guess this is real :cuteonion41: Thanks to

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(I'm looking forward to the set) and to whoever else looked at my poem and liked it and to the poeple who dropped me a congrats. I liked reading everyone's work.

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Oh sorry I thought you were going to make me one freestyle. If I'm allowed to choose I'd love Natsume from Natsume Yuujinchou if possible. Do you need images? I'd be happy with anything if it's nice as yours you have on now. Thank you again :o

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I am done with the signature! (:

If you want something changed, please do tell me. I shall correct myself. (:

Use the link provided in the html box with  tag, so the quality won

P.S The spoiler stretches the image,so do not worry why it looks so stretched.

 

 

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