DarkDjinn53 Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 wrote the original a while ago, played with it a few times since... I think this is the final version - we'll see ...and still I question myself... How much anger can one store How long 'til it burns to the core Can’t remember what I saw in you Or what it was pierced my heart through To myself I have chided for being so easily blind-sided at how I could have missed the signs There were spotlights on the mines Like some kind of shape-shifter You became my personal trickster Teeth and claws You kept hidden My heart is now torn ... bitten I paced and crawled around ...seeking The scattered pieces my mind shrieking My heart goes on now patched and faded For still I search but wary … jaded For the one worthy of me But ... ‘til then... alone I'll be 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morinaga's Girl Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 Very beautiful poem, I like it very much! *__* This is my favorite part: My heart goes on now patched and faded For still I search but wary … jaded For the one worthy of me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chibi-Seme Chidori Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 Loved your poem. It was great! :Red_fox: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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