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Status: Discontinued

 

Author Note: As fair warning, I have never even expected I would write something like this so soon. The inspiration just hit me instantly and BAM! I couldn't stop typing anymore. This is seriously impromptu. The idea of writing a fic about BabaTaiki did cross my mind in the past but I wanted to focus more on writing MisuShin so this is rather super unexpected.

 

Disclaimer: I own nobody. Baba and Taiki belong only to themselves. This story is seriously impromptu. It's also my very first fic to write about the actors themselves. Not as MisuShin. I don't even have a title for this. LOL – written by yojichan

 

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Baba: Hey, I thought you'll be hanging out at Taki's place tonight.

 

Taiki: No. He stood me up. We were supposed to meet with some of the guys from work. I dunno..

 

Baba: Are you okay?

 

Taiki: I'm fine. I'm just a little tired. How are you? Fancy seeing you here alone in this bar. Your friends stood you up too?

 

Baba: Nothing like that. I just thought I try to relax alone.

 

Taiki: Hey...am I bothering you?

 

Baba: (laughs) No! No! Not at all. It's actually great to see you.

 

Taiki: You too. I am actually thinking about going home to visit my family and stay there for a few days...I dunno...maybe a few weeks give or take. (pauses) Baba-chan...what are you thinking?

 

Baba: (jolts) Huh? Me? Oh nothing...I was just thinking..maybe I'd do the same. I've been hanging out with friends most of the time..all this nonstop work coming in. Not that I'm complaining. I mean I like being busy.

 

Taiki: But you haven't made any clear plans about how to take the time off did you?

 

Baba: (chuckles) You got me!

 

Taiki: How long do you plan on staying in this bar?

 

Baba: Are you going anywhere?

 

Taiki: (smiles) No.

 

Baba: Then keep me company then. Unless you prefer a karaoke bar? I know one somewhere close by. The owner is a good friend of mine. We won't be harassed there.

 

Taiki: (laughs) oh no! No! No! I'm not really in the mood for rowdiness. I told you I'm tired, right?

 

Baba: Oh yeah...sorry. I just remembered we used to sing random things and dance like idiots during breaks.

 

Taiki: Yeah..good times.

 

Baba: Good times! Let's make a toast to that!

 

Taiki: Kanpai!

 

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Taiki: Baba-chan...you could stay at my place, you know.

 

Baba: (tipsy) Now why would I do that?

 

Taiki: You're in no condition to go home. Besides you live very far from here.

 

Baba: And you do?

 

Taiki: Well, at least I'm still a bit sober enough to stay awake to get us a cab.

 

Baba: (groggy) Okay. I'm sorry for the bother.

 

Taiki: Alright, let me help you up.

 

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Baba: Ojamashimasu...nice place you got here.

 

Taiki: Thanks. Just relax on the couch and I'll get you some water.

 

Baba: Coffee.

 

Taiki: No. You need sleep, man.

 

Baba: They say coffee is good for hangovers.

 

Taiki: Wait till morning for that at least.

 

Baba: Don't worry..I won't puke here at your place.

 

Taiki: I didn't think you would. I could get you a fresh shirt if you like.

 

Baba: I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

 

Taiki: None at all.

 

 

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Baba: Thanks for letting me stay here last night.

 

Taiki: No problem. More coffee?

 

Baba: No. Now that I think about it, there has got to be another way to cure a hangover than coffee. I mean..I don't even like this stuff.

 

Taiki: Haha! That reminded me when we were still shooting for Pure. You hated the stuff but you drank it anyways.

 

Baba: Yeah. But I like this omelet though. Tastes good.

 

Taiki: Taki gave me the recipe for it. I hope I didn't put too much mushrooms.

 

Baba: No. It's fine..it's fine. I like it. This is better than coffee.

 

Taiki: Good.

 

Baba: Hey...I know I've mentioned this before but I know it's different when I will say it and there's just the two of us here.

 

Taiki: What is it?

 

Baba: (sighs) I'm really glad I got to work with you in the movie.

 

Taiki: (smiles) Me too. It was fun.

 

Baba: You were amazing. I've worked with other actors, most of them have become my friends. (pauses) But you're amazing. Really good.

 

Taiki: (chuckles) I just brought you to my home to work off the hangover and you're getting all sentimental on me, Baba-chan.

 

Baba: (laughs) Mattaku..I mean it. I really do.

 

Taiki: Well, since we're on the subject. I'd like to say the feeling is mutual. I've been in this industry since I was a child and I've had my share of working with really talented people, surrounded by it actually. Yet one day you meet someone who makes you feel really comfortable considering the kind of roles we portrayed.

 

Baba: Yeah.

 

Taiki: I'm glad we met.

 

Baba: (smiles) Me too.

 

Taiki: So is it true?

 

Baba: What's true?

 

Taiki: You saying that I looked like someone you could love.

 

Baba: I didn't know you liked reading showbiz magazines.

 

Taiki: I don't. But one of the wardrobe staff told me about it.

 

Baba: (grins) You want me to prove it?

 

Taiki: (laughs) Stop joking! Forget I asked.

 

Baba: (inhales deeply) I wasn't joking.

 

Taiki: Ah.

 

Baba: Like I said..do you me to prove it?

 

Taiki: Why would I do that?

 

Baba: Just because...

 

Taiki: (chuckles) You're being weird, you know.

 

Baba: I'm not the one who started this.

 

Taiki: Well, I did so I'm ending it before it gets any weirder.

 

Baba: This isn't the movies. We're just two guys having breakfast.

 

Taiki: While the other guy wants to prove something the other guy isn't prepared to accept.

 

Baba: Are you scared?

 

Taiki: (silence)

 

Baba: I'll take that as a yes.

 

Taiki: Do you always take silence as a yes?

 

Baba: Not always. They sometimes could also mean a No.

 

Taiki: Maybe.

 

Baba: Is this one of those times?

 

Taiki: Maybe.

 

Baba: Do you always talk cryptic like this?

 

Taiki: No. I'm usually straightforward.

 

Baba: You sound lost sometimes like you're all over the place.

 

Taiki: That's just my personality. I can't help it. You however is very noisy.

 

Baba: I can be. That's just my personality. I can't help it either.

 

Taiki: You're awfully tame today though.

 

Baba: Maybe I still feel the buzz from last night. Maybe my head still hurts.

 

Taiki: Do you wanna stay longer here?

 

Baba: Will you let me?

 

Taiki: Are you gonna answer the question I asked earlier?

 

Baba: You're still thinking about it?

 

Taiki: A direct answer would be nice.

 

Baba: I thought we liked speaking in codes.

 

Taiki: No, I don't.

 

Baba: If I kissed you now, would that prove anything?

 

Taiki: How will this talk end up with you kissing me?

 

Baba: Because that's exactly what I'm about to do right this very second.

 

Taiki: Ahh..Baba-chan...mmmmpphh..

 

Baba: (catches breath) You understand now?

 

Taiki: (gasps) Hmmm...what?

 

Baba: I said...(huffs) you understand now?

 

Taiki: Yeah..yeah...I do. (licks lips) How the hell did you learn to kiss like that?

 

Baba: Practice.

 

Taiki: Are you serious?

 

Baba: I have my ways and you were quite nice to kiss so why not?

 

Taiki: You were too. I thought I'd just follow my instincts and go with the flow.

 

Baba: I think we pulled it off quite well.

 

Taiki: I think we did, Baba-chan...I think we did.

 

Baba: (grins) Would you like another round?

 

Taiki: (aghast) Are you serious?

 

Baba: Well...?

 

Taiki: (smiles) Maybe.

 

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AFTERTALK: OMG! what do you guys think? dear lord..what possessed me to write this? LOL

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robertita

You are posess by the God of writing me dear yoji. As usually you have a great inspiration. As Baba said we want another round.

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Last_sky16

It really do sounds like THEM!!!!

GOSHHHHH!!!!! CONTINUE IT!!!

Wooohhoooo!!!

I like how it is not too cheesy and really reflecting them as a person....

You really nailed them...the way Baba chan talks... hpw straightfoward Taiki is... EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!

Baba chan..you are such a naughty drunker!!! *spank you*

Taiki~~~taiki....u are a very honest person..I LOVE YOU!!!!

 

YOJICHAN!!! YOU ARE A GREAT SENPAI!!!

How did you do it?? gosh this is amazing...AMAZING!!!!!!!! KYAAAAAHOOOOOO!!!!!

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yojichan
You are posess by the God of writing me dear yoji. As usually you have a great inspiration. As Baba said we want another round.

 

oh wow!! thank you so much for the amazing compliment. *floats*

another round? ohohohhoho!!!

i might have to ask Taiki if he's up for another one. *giggles*

again, thank you! thank you so much, darling roberta. :)

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yojichan
It really do sounds like THEM!!!!

GOSHHHHH!!!!! CONTINUE IT!!!

Wooohhoooo!!!

I like how it is not too cheesy and really reflecting them as a person....

You really nailed them...the way Baba chan talks... hpw straightfoward Taiki is... EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!

Baba chan..you are such a naughty drunker!!! *spank you*

Taiki~~~taiki....u are a very honest person..I LOVE YOU!!!!

 

YOJICHAN!!! YOU ARE A GREAT SENPAI!!!

How did you do it?? gosh this is amazing...AMAZING!!!!!!!! KYAAAAAHOOOOOO!!!!!

 

OMG!! I DID? HAHAHAHHAA!!! oh gosh..i'm dying here. hahahahhahaha!!!

i think watching too much videos and staring at pictures did me in. LOL

but really when inspiration hits...it hits soooooooooooooo HARD LIKE A BRICK! xD

thank you! thank you so much, June sweetheart!

i really appreciate you enjoyed this. i was quite enjoying it too. OMG! *hugsies*

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diniasa

Oh Yojichan... you are amazing... *2 thumbs*

What a great stories and really we want the next round :p

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Last_sky16

@yojichan

 

I wish I can have a brain like yours!!!

Gosh!!! you r brilliant!!! I wanna make bunny jumps with you...*giggles*

Well this really cooled down my stress.. I have add math's paper tomorrow!!!

Yesterday i was fighting with Chemistry and today i am suppose to be studying rite now..LOL

Well I think you should make another attempt to write more about them.. BABATAIKI!!!

 

We should break the ice!!!

There's almost zero BabaTaiki fics and I think you really heated the readers up.. ^____^

 

Taiki and Baba chan...you really rocks my nerdy world!!!!! SUGOI!!!

MORE OF THE KISSES!!! KISS KISS KISS!!!! chuuuuu~~~Do the chuuuuu~~~ :-X *lost my mind* @____

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yojichan

Oh Yojichan... you are amazing... *2 thumbs*

What a great stories and really we want the next round :p

 

REALLY? omg! thank you! thank you so much, my dear. i am so happy you enjoyed reading this.

everyone seems to want another round. yay!

 

@yojichan

 

I wish I can have a brain like yours!!!

Gosh!!! you r brilliant!!! I wanna make bunny jumps with you...*giggles*

Well this really cooled down my stress.. I have add math's paper tomorrow!!!

Yesterday i was fighting with Chemistry and today i am suppose to be studying rite now..LOL

Well I think you should make another attempt to write more about them.. BABATAIKI!!!

 

We should break the ice!!!

There's almost zero BabaTaiki fics and I think you really heated the readers up.. ^____^

 

Taiki and Baba chan...you really rocks my nerdy world!!!!! SUGOI!!!

MORE OF THE KISSES!!! KISS KISS KISS!!!! chuuuuu~~~Do the chuuuuu~~~ :-X *lost my mind* @____

 

i like how you said Do the chuuuuu~~~ HAHAHHAHA!!!

oh my brain is a crazy place. hahahahha! you'll get dizzy, sweetheart.

i'm glad this provided a nice ice breaker from the stress you are in your studies. hehehe!

GANBARIMASU!!! FIGHTING!!!

so let's bunny dance! wooohooo!

oh gosh...i didn't expect you all want more of this. oh my heart!! doki! doki! doki! kyaaaaaaaa!!!

thank you so much again! :D

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@yojichan

 

Hahahahhahaha DO THE CHUUUUU~~~~

Well better than mine.. becoz itz full of... NOTHING!!! LOL

I still remember a friend of mine draw a mind map for my brain..

She drew nothing in the end..XDXDXD

 

 

Weeeee~~~~bunny bunny bunny!!!

la la la let's dance!!!rabbit1rabbit1rabbit1

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Do the chuu~~~

the bunny bunny chuuu~~

LOL what a friend you got there. xD

ohmigosh...let's see what happens, let's see if there'll be more to this. i am so excited. this is making me giggle so much.

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Sloan

HAHAhahahah this was inspired by the karaoke bar video??? and Ari spread it like a virus. hahahhaha I loved it. :PPPP~~~~~

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HAHAhahahah this was inspired by the karaoke bar video??? and Ari spread it like a virus. hahahhaha I loved it. :PPPP~~~~~

 

hahahahhaa!!! thank you! thank you, Sloan!

I'm so happy you loved it.

there was something about what June posted about her friend at the TK FC and it just hit me and i just started writing.

and the karaoke bar..oh yeah..i had to include that here too. hehehe! no way i was gonna let it fly by.

it's also been a culmination of other things i've seen at the NG vids from Pure. :)

have you watched the Naitou Taiki cultural dance he did for Baba-chan? hahahahah!

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@yojichan

 

*gigles too*

I think our MisuShin fever is back!!!!!

Well most of my friends thought of that about me. I think maybe they are right. But when it comes to Yaoi and BabaTaiki.. MY MIND IS TOO FULL!!! xD

 

Please do as you wish.. If you are willing to continue this then I will dance TWICE HARDER!!! LOL

 

Btw..when u mention about the cultural dance..dun u think it looks quite the same as the bunny smiley like i just used in my previous post??? LOL

 

WTV IT IS.. HE DANCED FOR BABA CHAN!!! and do anyone notice about the 'love arrow' part too?? when Baba chan made doki~doki sound?? YOSH!!! IM TOO HAPPY!!!!!! *pinching my own cheeks*

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OMG! how can i ever ever forget the love arrow thing?

The way Baba-chan just waved away Taki's arrow but accepting Taiki's.

OMG! how can i forget that? if that has no meaning...i don't know what does.

that spoke volumes right there. *giggles*

 

you know now that i'm reminded again of Taiki's dance for Baba-chan..

it's almost like a rooster dancing for a hen.

i think it's a mating dance.

OMG!

I JUST SAID MATING!!! A MATING RITUAL DANCE!

OMG! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

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ShivaDrake

AAARFFFF ARRRRRFFFF ARFFFFFFF I'm breathless.

except the fact I got all excited just thinking about Baba completely DRUNK.

but, srsly.....................

 

 

Baba: If I kissed you now, would that prove anything?

 

Taiki: How will this talk end up with you kissing me?

 

Baba: Because that's exactly what I'm about to do right this very second.

 

KYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg.omg.omg. ahahahahahahaah I'm fanning myself with one hand and trying to shut me up with the other.

arrrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhh. GOOD JOB, YOJI!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

have you watched the Naitou Taiki cultural dance he did for Baba-chan? hahahahah!

I JUST SAID MATING!!! A MATING RITUAL DANCE!

 

WHAT WHAT WHAT????!!! BABA AND TAIKI...........DOING.......A MATING RITUAL DANCE???????

ppppppppffffffffffffffffffffffff ahahahahahah . okay. srsly. W.H.E.R.E !!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????

 

HAHAhahahah this was inspired by the karaoke bar video??? and Ari spread it like a virus. hahahhaha I loved it. :PPPP~~~~~

what what did I do? ahahahaha I spread that video like a virus????? ahahahahahhahahaahhaha

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@ShivaDrave: OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOMEFUL REPLY!!! *tackleglomphugs*

you are so hyper and rabid! I LOVE YOU!!! XD

ahahahahha! well, that dance is on the NG video of Pure. the boys were doing these really goofy things and one of them was Taiki dancing for Baba-chan.

and the cupid shots, well...Taiki was shooting an imaginary arrow at Baba-chan and he took it but when Taki did the same thing, Baba-chan simply waved the imaginary arrow away from himself. so basically, he only accepted Taiki's arrow. kyaaaaaaaaa!!! :D

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OMG! how can i ever ever forget the love arrow thing?

The way Baba-chan just waved away Taki's arrow but accepting Taiki's.

OMG! how can i forget that? if that has no meaning...i don't know what does.

that spoke volumes right there. *giggles*

 

you know now that i'm reminded again of Taiki's dance for Baba-chan..

it's almost like a rooster dancing for a hen.

i think it's a mating dance.

OMG!

I JUST SAID MATING!!! A MATING RITUAL DANCE!

OMG! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

 

It's not Taki but Shota's love arrow!!

I think that would clear things up about their relationship..

Baba chan is clearing things up his relationship with Shota..LOL

THAT ARROW HAS TO BE SOMETHING!!!!

Gosh..some people didn't notice it becoz it's very short..

But for the first time we can see them showing attractions like that..LOL

Baba chan is being so public..XD

Just look at Taiki's face..he was like "Baba chan!! OMG!! People are going to notice it!!"

Hohohohoho nvm Taiki..WE KNEW IT!!! lmao

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@ShivaDrave: OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOMEFUL REPLY!!! *tackleglomphugs*

you are so hyper and rabid! I LOVE YOU!!! XD

ahahahahha! well, that dance is on the NG video of Pure. the boys were doing these really goofy things and one of them was Taiki dancing for Baba-chan.

and the cupid shots, well...Taiki was shooting an imaginary arrow at Baba-chan and he took it but when Taki did the same thing, Baba-chan simply waved the imaginary arrow away from himself. so basically, he only accepted Taiki's arrow. kyaaaaaaaaa!!!

 

ahahah you're welcome!!! I love yr stories.

and...yeah I'm always a little hyper and zealous but when it comes to Baba.....aaaaraggghhhh I'm non compos mentis.

 

ahahahahha! well, that dance is on the NG video of Pure. the boys were doing these really goofy things and one of them was Taiki dancing for Baba-chan.

and the cupid shots, well...Taiki was shooting an imaginary arrow at Baba-chan and he took it but when Taki did the same thing, Baba-chan simply waved the imaginary arrow away from himself. so basically, he only accepted Taiki's arrow. kyaaaaaaaaa!!!

aaaargghhh OMG!!!!!! ah ah ah okay calm down. I MUST watch it. but... okay maybe I'm a little gaga so be patient.... what does NG stand for? where can I find it? yes, I'm hopeless xD

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@June: OMG!! THAT WAS SUCH A MAJOR MISTAKE! *kicks self in the gut* I'M SO SORRY!!

yeah, it was Shota's arrow. it was Shota! OMG! what a horrible mistake. gyaaaah! T___T

Baba-chan did clear up his relationship with Shota. hahahahahahhaa!!! xD

aaaaah! if only those imaginary arrows could talk. weeeeeeeeeeee!!!!

 

@ShivaDrake: NG stands for Not Good, hehehe..basically, it's just the guys doing goofy and random things. there were a bunch of NG videos for Pure that were posted in the fanclub but OMG...you will have to go through LOTS of pages to find them and i'm not sure anymore if they're still available. i actually regret i wasn't able to save some of them. T____T but to give you an idea, most of the fanvids posted are samples of what an NG video looks like since a lot of them were taken from those scenes. don't worry, we're all hopeless! :D

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Last_sky16

No~no yojichan daijobu!!!

hohohohohoohohohohohoh love arrow!!!

I think that's a very memorable scene...I still could freshly see it inside my mind. xD

If that arrow could talk then we might end up losing our consciousness of OVER EXCITED!!!

I am wondering what else are they keeping from us..

they rarely says anything about each other..

Taiki's flushing faces whenever Baba chan is near to him..Taiki's action of making a distance when Baba chan is around him..Baba chan 'meaningful' glances to Taiki...The 'aura' surrounding them..

Hahahahahahaaa!!!! *imagine things*

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oh June..i'm sure they're keeping SO MUCH from us. waaaaaaah!!

all that glances...those meaningful looks...the way Taiki smiles and laughs at Baba-chan's jokes..

the way Baba-chan gazes at him closely when he talks when he should be facing the camera instead.

waaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiii!!!!

there's a love aura right there. YAY!!! *giggles*

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Their love is something that we won't feel bored to talk about. The more they are keeping, the more excited we are!!!

 

I think Taiki tries to keep the most. Like in the birthday party..Taiki does not even want to sit beside Baba chan!!! I could feel how nervous and how shy he is...

 

JUST LOOK AT THE PART WHEN BABA CHAN PULL HIM!!!Baba chan wants Taiki to sit beside him and look how SHY taiki is..>///

Hahaha and if you notice in the part when the guests are talking about Taiki..they were sa lying Taiki is cute something like that..suddenly

The viddie got s'thing problem like it is paused but we can hear the voice and Baba chan suddenly raising his voice..he said something like an interruption..LOL

 

I was using my headphone when I realized that.. KYAAA!!! or...

am I dreaming?? 0.0???

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OMG! I KNOW RIGHT?

Taiki looked really nervous..i mean it's so weird since he doesn't seem to have a problem in gatherings. always hamming up to the camera and being cute but yeah..at the party..he looked so shy. ahahaahahha! xD

Baba-chan like keeping him close like he can't stand it that Taiki will sit away from him. he's sooooooooo sweet!

OMG! WHAT DID BABA-CHAN SAY??

T_____T

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Ok firstly.. WHAT THE HECK DID I JUST WROTE???!!!

F*** this is why i hate writing by using my phone..==!!!

Im sorry yojichan what I meant "they were talking"... wth did i wrote?? @[email protected]

 

Kyaaa!!! I wish I knew it but I dun speak Japanese...

I think itz too bad the viddie quality sucks.. If not then we can watch Baba chan's jelly face!! weeeee~~~nyappy!!!

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hahahahahah!

daijobu! no worries!

it happens. :D

i got what you meant. hehehehe!

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