Disappointed

[Saga]

I am standing here again,

staring at your back for the truth's sake.

Your eyes are afraid to look at me,

why we came to that?

 

I find myself in a disappointment,

I bathe myself in the bitterness,

I shoot for my happiness.

 

 

Frozen,I chose to be,

hated - I never was,

but you disappoint me to a hating point,my dear loss

 

I find myself in this white land,

where my clothes went to?

I find myself in this grave,

what my warmth went for ?

 

What hurts the most ain't love,

what hurts the most is the expectation you never received.

What hurts me the most is you,

you,who never made me feel this loss.

 

Disappointed I go on to this cold point,

where my mind got caged by the sky,

where my feelings became petals,

where you don't exist....my beautiful loss.

[swordfish0714]

Nice poetry you got but has a bit of melancholy... Feeling blue today? Hope your okay..

[Saga]

(: Well, I took out my disappointment in this.....whatever it is,so I am better. (;

[Belita]

The poem is great...

Dark...Sad...

But loved it

 

*hug*

[swordfish0714]

At least you've got something to release it...

Here to make you even happier..

[Saga]

Thank you for liking it. (:

Just had a moment of...anger+disappointment and wrote this down.

 

EDIT: LOL! Silly,shy boy!

[cherryyuri]

great one, saga!

well, im glad it helped you to feel better.

[BRIDGET]

What is this poem? a break ? you break the rhythm, dear with the longest verses... tell me why? show you to me....

Disappointment? I feel little bit of pain, more than anger and a bit of sorrow

Bear it dear, we are humans,as you like to say, and as humans we fail.

Not very good analysis this time, ne??

maybe I feel disappointed too...

[Saga]

Don't be disappointed,because you darted it down;without analysis you did well. (: What analysis a disappointment needs? - None, it's a bare fact,already done and felt,after a break. True, you sensed the break through my broken rhythm. ; )

[BRIDGET]

Don't be disappointed,because you darted it down;without analysis you did well. (: What analysis a disappointment needs? - None, it's a bare fact,already done and felt,after a break. True, you sensed the break through my broken rhythm. ; )

 

Not disappointed by my analysis or your poem, I could never be, Saga & you know that....