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This is my entry :) Hope it meets the requirements ^^; Sorry, it's really hard writing with word limits OTL

 

The First Time He Called My Name - 540 words

 

 

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Advance happy holidays to everyone! This entry was written while listening to Passengers' "Heart's On Fire" (acoustic ver.) from the album Whispers. The song is awfully beautiful, heartwarming and heartrending at the same time. Actually the whole album is! (So try listening to it if you have the time, ne?)

 

 

 

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I was writing this while thinking about how temporary we truly are in this world, but that doesn't stop life from being worth it all. Despite the pain and disappointments, I hope everyone is enjoying life as much as I do right now.

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Entry: Firsts

Word count: 599 words

 

 

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It's my first post in the forum and first creative writing in English (not my native). Thanks for reading.

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FLIGHT

 

 

This love I feel for him is burning me inside, every time we are on the same room my heart rate accelerates and my body temperature escalates. I do not know when I started to develop these feelings for him but now I cannot deny them. I love watching him run in the track field, his flush cheeks, the way he pants out of breath when he's done with his laps, the way some of the sweat drops would slowly slide down his neck and disappear pass his collarbone and get lost in his chest. The dreams I have about licking them clean off of his torso. When he looks up at the sky and smiles as he enjoys the summer breeze, I feel like I crumble just a little bit more, my unattainable love. There is this side of me that he doesn't know about, I'm afraid that one day he will notice and resent me for it. All of this makes my heart throb and hurt, hurt and throb in an endless cycle. I know this can never come to light, my love for him is not permitted, it would be frown upon by society, and most of all it would hurt him, so it can never see the light of day. And so it remains in the dark recess of my soul, where it will be kept a hidden secret even from myself.

 

Today he came back from home ec class with a tray full of brownies and happily gave it to me saying:

 

- Surprise Benny! I made this for you to congratulate you for getting the spot on the swimming tryouts. I even added some of the yummy nuts that grandma brought from her last trip!

 

Then he jumped on the couch right next to me to watch me taste one of the brownies, which were truly delicious. As I sat there watching him see me eat with that goofy look on his face, I realized that I was doing the right thing by walking away from his side, a period of time being apart would do us both good. In cooling off my feelings I would be able to remain by his side all of our lives instead of blurting out something hidden unexpectedly and losing him forever. It wasn't out of the blue, I had been planning this study trip abroad for quite some time, by the time I returned I hope to have moved on from this unrequired love of mine. This was the initial step in breaking away from my first love in life.

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Hello, all you talented hobby writers!

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Thank you all for taking part in this contest!

This month too... it was hard to choose a favorite among all these great stories, yet we made a decision.

 

 

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Thank you once again for participating! I am looking forward to read your stories next time! ^_^

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