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This story was written while listening to One's debut single,

. It's a beautiful song, so try checking it out~!

I wrote this as an answer story to my entry for another BL Writer's Contest in this forum, the one with the theme

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for November 2016 (mine was titled "I'll Let You Know"). If you'd like, please read that one first before reading this one.

Word count: a perfect 600~!

 

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idk how to read or write. but here's my attempt at something c o o l??

wc: 600

 

 

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Word Count: 408

 

I was kinda reminiscing about the past myself so here is...

"Every Part of You is a Reminder of why I Love You"

 

 

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Kinda went a lil over 600 words here with 626 ;_; Here it is~!

 

The Prince & His Knight

 

“Who on earth are you?”

 

Arthur had stared at the man who had spoken, in disbelief. Not only was he NOT the princess Arthur had travelled far and wide to rescue, he was wearing a frilly indigo dress.

 

Though regardless, Arthur found himself mesmerized at first sight by the man’s slight feminine features, from his plump, pink tinged cheeks to the well carved collar bones which protruded above the frills of the low cut dress.

 

Of Course this had made Arthur drop his guard, and the man had pounced on the knight. It was then, He had noticed the crest on the sword the man carried, and realised the man was a knight too, of Zalor, a kingdom neighbouring his own of Zerlia.

 

He had questioned the man, who had refused him any answers but after a swordfight, which the man lost due to his restricting gown, he had dejectedly explained.

 

“Im Prince Gabriel Inkheart of Zalor, firstborn of the king and queen of Zalor and a knight of the royal court. The Princess, is my only sister. An year ago on her 16th birthday, the Dragon wrecked havoc on the castle and abducted her.

My parents….They were absolutely terrified.Mourning the loss of their only daughter yet fearing anyone sent to rescue her would never return alive. Legends spoke of a Prince who would rescue the princess and thus, i, her brother and a prince, took the responsibility and set off to free my sister.

After a grueling journey, i found her. Locked in this god forsaken tower, alone and terrified. I also discovered from her that the dragon that held her captive, had very poor sight.

And then, it hit me. It would've been impossible for both of us to escape. But if i were to give my sister my clothing, and put on her dress, i could have fooled the dragon. Which i did. While my sister escaped in my attire, i took her place.”

 

Gabriel had stood up and walked towards the large window Arthur had come through a while back. Looking out at the sight that greeted him, he had gasped.

 

“The dragon...You…?”

 

“Oh that? Yea, i slayed him.”

Arthur had replied, grinning sheepishly.

 

Gabriel had continued staring at him in wonder, before bowing his head.

 

“I am eternally grateful.”

 

Silence had once again ensued, before Arthur had gotten up and made his way towards Gabriel. Reaching his target, he had gotten on one knee, taking hold of the prince’s soft palm.

 

“Your highness, long ago, a knight left his kingdom, keen to fulfil a prophecy bestowed upon him. He was to rescue a princess, and earn her heart. And this had given him purpose, to keep going no matter how many dangers he encountered. I understand, these circumstances aren't quite what either of us expected...But I believe we have met for a reason. So will you, Prince Gabriel, allow me to be your saviour, your knight in shining armor?”

 

All the while Arthur had spoken, Gabriel’s blush had gotten progressively deeper.

 

Then, Gabriel had let go of Arthur’s hand and using it to unsheath his sword, rested its blade lightly on Arthur’s shoulder.

 

“Then from this moment forth, i bestow upon you, Arthur, Knight of Zerlia, the honour of having rescued the Prince of Zelor, and the title of the knight who shall lead me home.”

 

Lifting his sword and sheathing it, Gabriel continued,

 

“Now rise, my fellow knight and lead the way.”

 

 

And as they had run out of the tower, hands intertwined, Arthur had felt his heart palpitating. Was it adrenaline for their journey to come? Or something more?

Their eyes met and Gabriel laughed gleefully, emerald eyes twinkling.

 

Arthur certainly prayed so.

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MEMORIES

 

 

It was cold that morning, it had rain the night before and left a bit of frost in the air. He checked the room temperature and adjusted the thermostat to warm the bedroom a bit more, he drew the curtains to let in a little more light, then fixed Jacob's pillows and covered him with another blanket. After checking him again John left the room and went downstairs to the kitchen to make some chamomile tea and get some saltines. Once done he took the tea tray back to the bedroom and place it on the bedside table.

 

He loves watching him sleep, always had. It gave him a sense of peace, knowing he was safe and sound, within his reach and far away from the things that could hurt him. Here he could keep him out of harm’s way. The risk of exposure to damaging presences was minimal. This was a controlled environment where Jacob could stay calm and recover.

 

Long gone were their childhood days, when everything seemed simpler and they could take long strolls in the park under the shade of the trees holding hands and enjoying the cool afternoon breeze, when all they had to worry about were school, chores and being kids. That carefree life was the stuff that made his memory map.

 

They had lost contact when they were teens, Jacob and his family moved to the countryside due to his father’s job and they had to part ways. Nonetheless he never lost track of him; that is how he came to know that Jacob had been bullied nonstop throughout school because of the way he looked. Fragile and short of stature, thin and pale he attracted the attention of the bullies like bees to honey. He had been harassed until he dropped out of school and moved back to the city on his own, there John contacted him and offered him a job as his assistant to help him manage his house. Jacob was so happy to have found him and gladly took him up on his offer, which is how he slowly took charge of his life.

 

John sat down next to the sleeping Jacob and brushed the fringe out of his eyes. He loves him so much. He gently caressed his cheek and whispered to him:

 

- Good morning gorgeous!

 

- John? – Asked Jacob groggily sitting up. – John! – exclaimed Jacob excitedly and hugged him like there was no tomorrow.

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|| END OF ៙BL LONG AGO~Writer Contest~៙ ||

[YaoiOtaku Writer Contest]

 

 

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our Writer Contest!

You all did so well, that it was impossible for us to choose just 1 winner. So, this month's winners are

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The winners get as follows:

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card (please state which card you'd prefer)

 

 

 

 

Everyone participating gets 2000 points

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Hi

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This was so much fun!

 

 

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I would like to request Bukiyou na Silent

 

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Thank you and have an amazing week!

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Oh hey, that's swell !

Congrats to the participants:

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, there was a ton of effort and cool stories to read.

 

Do we drop what we would like here? I'll say the Itadakimasu, Gochisou-sama manga cover card. It's really cute.

Thank you

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and the YO staff that read our stuff. My heart is warmededeth.

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Thank you

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For my lovely manga card, I love it!!!

 

 

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Have a nice evening!

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Thank you to all~! Also, congratulations to all the talented writers here!

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sama, I'd like the manga card for Kanjou Spectrum please~ much thanks~!

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This month was pretty tough.

 

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OMFG this is so late! Can i have the Senya Ichiya Romanesque card then? Sorry and thank you! :D

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