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This month's theme shall be "COUNTLESS".

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music and love to

write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving the chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general, how do you interpret it, we have picked

a certain song. Based on its melody, you have to write down either

a poem or a song lyrics. Of course, it's up to you how you name it,

as long as you mention once "Countless" in the content.

 

 

 

Rules

Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political, and no child/ animal abuse themes.

Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything, depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody.

Post the final result on this thread.

Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

 

Prizes

Each user that applies to "Music Box" contest will get 2,000 points.

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 manga cover card

 

 

 

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Deadline

MARCH, 2017

 

 

 

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Pieces of You

 

When you look into the mirror what do you see

A beautiful guy a beautiful guy

You’re truly a beautiful guy

But deep down inside you’re ugly, you're ugly

Nothing will ever be good enough

 

You’re calling others faggots

You hate them you resent them

You want to bash their heads in

What are you so afraid off

Are you afraid that you’re just the same

 

You shattered his dream countless times

Because you have been looking into the mirror far too long

You don’t want to touch him to look at him

But deep down you know

He is pieces of you

 

Ugly heart Ugly heart

Is what’s left inside of you’re beautiful body

They call you a bitch they call you trash

Does it make you want to hurt them

Does it make you want to run

 

When will you face the truth

That you do not hate him

When will you see that all the little pieces are falling, shattered

When will you see you loved him

Because he is pieces of you

 

Do you hate him

Because he is pieces of you

Do you love him

Because he is pieces of you

Pieces of you

 

You said he was a faggot

But you were just the same

But these pieces are too sharp to put back together

And these shards are lying in a pool of blood

And their you’re pieces to him

 

Because he is pieces of you

Because you’re pieces of him

Although it’s too late

One day he will wake up smiling

Realizing

You were pieces of him

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my first contest entry, wish me banana! i mean luck, kyaaaaaa :Excited:

 

 

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This entry was written in Terza Rima form. Everyone doing well?

 

 

 

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Whew! Finally done! Its 8 paragraphs, just nice, but i hope the extra one line at the bottom doesnt count as a new para? I put a spacing between the last line and the 8th para for the purpose of impact.

 

The Truth Seeker

 

Countless nights i spent awake

Wondering, thinking without a break

Of beautiful lies that hide bitter truth

Like seeds hidden beneath layers of fruit

 

Illusions that cast worries aside

Blind us from seeing the incoming tide

We are led to believe everything is alright

What use is it then to stand and fight?

 

I have scoured the earth, searching

Through highs and lows, stumbling, lurching

Desperate for the truth, a means of escape

My voyages have left many jaws agape

 

Yet no closer am i to my destination

The more i run, the further gets my station

The sands of time slip through my fist

Weaker i grow, the inevitable approaching from the midst

 

The more i uncover the deeper i sink

Into the dark abyss, at insanity’s brink

Too many lies, too much deception

Where did they all start, what led to their inception?

 

I know now, that i know nothing

The weight of humanity’s ignorance is all but crushing

For the lies are as countless as the stars

Scattered across the pitch black sky of ours

 

Twinkling innocently, yet not what you see

Nothing is what it appears to be

But alas! My time has finally come

Slowly but surely, my limbs go numb

 

And as i lay, awaiting death

Taking a final, wheezing breath

I sob with joy, for i am finally unbound

From searching for what can't ever be found,

 

Not on this earth, never on this ground.

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Countless Contest]

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! All entries were very good and we had a hard time deciding.

Our winners are

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The winners win as follows,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want)

All participants get 2,000 points

 

 

 

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! :Dancing:

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  Shafa3 said:
Omg yes thank you! May i request a Viewfinder manga cover? =^^=

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