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lol..

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-san you nailed the guessing.. And yeah turning them into dolls, that was my idea according to your CASE :D

Also, the killer is... Not gonna say. keep it to myself :p

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Actually i hate human-figured dolls.. they freak me out.. since i was a kid i never had any.. I love stuffed animals though. my teddy bear is my best ^w^

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i love dolls but i love stuffed toys more :3 i have two teddy bears with me when i sleep XD

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mocchin please file a new case now :3

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Teddy bears are the best XD

Ok for the next case:

 

C.O.D: Deep cut through his throat.

T.O.D: Around midnight.

Place: Old building.

Suspects: His big brother, a specific gang (let's name it "Spiders Gang"), & His best friend.

Notes: The old building used to be for the Spiders Gang, His brother is in a Gang which is an enemy to the Spiders Gang, & His best friend is in love with the same girl as the victim (that girl belonged to the Spiders Gang boss)...

 

I gave you more details but I would like to see which suspect would you choose as the killer and for what reason ;)

I'm counting on you to give me the best story concerning these notes ^w^

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woah i just logged in today XD and i saw the case lol of all cases i think this is the one i have found to be the most hard one so far... imma think of the story right now sorry for being late... i`'ve been feeling unwell *sweatdrop*

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i'll think of a story plot that i hope you would like

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It was a bright sunny day and like no other days he was leisurely spending it inside his comfort zone his house... he just got out of the bath and was drying himself off when his cellphone rang... on the end of the line was his bestfriend since their elementary days... first was a morning greet followed by an apology when he picked up the call... his friend knowing that he was pretty much nocturnal and mostly busy on his work... can't help but feel guilty if whether he had interrupt him at a bad time... sighing and reassuring his friend that he wasn't really busy at that time and had just got out of the bath... the tone of his friend changed into a very hyper one making him sound like a high school girl excited for her first date with her boyfriend... clearing his throat made his friend realize the signal to stop for he had been too hype enough that he had annoyed him... now he explained the situation clearly and it seems like it was about a pretty girl that he had just met... he had fallen head over heels with her and he was nervous to ask her out on a date... knowing the his friend being very quick with the way with girls had now a girl made him nervous over just a simple invite for a date made him know that it was serious... he's friend begged him to come and meet him at their frequent hangout spot... having no choice but to come he immediately wore whatever he could get his hands on... its been a while since he had feel the heat of day and it gave him a pretty nasty feeling... specially that he felt that something bad will happen... as he was walking down town one of his most annoyment on going outside was right in front of him... he was being scout to be a model as always... he clicked his tonge in annoyment and was about to slip through... but what await him was a horde of girls asking him for a picture with him... he was about to explode when he heard a familiar voice call out his name... to him it felt like a ray of hope in the edge of a cliff... his friends presence didn't have much help though... its not everyday that you get to see 2 handsome guys that could make the hearts of girls go wild... well true enough their looks was not to be belittled, they were both quite known for it since they were little... finally a girl realized and gave their profiles away... they were both had been featured in the magazines several times... of course they were not models though so it wasn't a wonder why they won't be recognized that fast... but now that caused more of an uproar to his fans... who would have thought that the novelist you love the most was a young hunk who you have been waiting for his every appearance when his being featured in a magazine... seems like its a no route to get away without a picture or article or 2... but having his best friend beside was enough to make him feel at ease... after some couple of pics they finally had let them go... he felt exhausted more than the times he was infront of his laptop all day writing his novel... his friend kept silence as they were walking for he knew he had ruin his day... he grabbed his friends arm and twisted it making him scream out of pain... his friend apologized again and again and he finally let go... "this better be serious or im gonna give you a good beating" he said while feeling refreshed... his friend smiled and scratched his head very bashfully... well he can indeed see how his friend was being serious... after a while his friend point to a direction where a girl was standing... she really was very pretty and has her charm standout... as they got closer to her he finally knew what why he was feeling so relentless after his friend call him... they were both introduced to each other by his friend very cheerfully... the girl was with her friend and he got the idea... his friend was so nervous that he asked for a group date... well the pairings were of course as expected... the group date was normal they ate at a restaurant, went to arcades, and escort the girls with their shopping... they part ways on the train station and his friend was happily thanking him... he didn't want to ruin the mood so he waited til they were infront of his friends house... he was hesitant to tell his friend but he just couldn't leave him in danger that might cost him his life... he cleared his throat and the mood fell into a serious one... he told everything he knew about the girl to his friend which caused his friend to feel empty and blank minded... his friend got mad and shouted at him feeling so confused... he felt depressed the whole time he walk alone... he was just a mile away from his apartment when he suddenly felt a sharp pain occur on the back of his head... he can't stand and he felt his consciousness slipping away... when he gain his consciousness he was in a dark old wreck building... his sight was still trying to adjust to the darkness and when he can finally see... a silhouette was striding to him... this figure was from someone he know for they had been together for a whole day earlier... a deep voice shouted and said that if he struggled his best friend would be killed... the person pulled his hair and was pointing a flickblade at his neck... he can see from the eyes of this person that they were just being controlled... he glared at the person "why'd you have to involve him with this?!" the person looked at him sadly "i'm sorry" the knife almost touched his neck... but then he heard the blade falling to the ground as he saw her tears fall down from her face... she stood up and covered him "I can't kill him! he's the best friend of the guy i love" a rage growl echo through the 4 walls as a gunshot was released aimed at them... to their surprise another person shielded them and had been hit on his shoulder... he fell on his knees and she cried more as she hugged him... "i followed you cause i feel so bad for shouting at you... i'm sorry if i let my frustration get ahead of me" his friend was apologizing to him again... "you fool!" he was crying as he tried to support his friend to stand... they heard footsteps and a sword being dragged getting closer to them... he pushed back his friend and the girl... he covered them and got hit by the sword on his neck... he fell to the ground and his friend rushed to him... before the sword hit them once again a gunshot send the sword flying away... his older brother with his gang was there.. "I'm sorry" his friend was crying as he tried to sit up... "stop apologizing already stupid!" he hit his friend in the head with all his force before he fell completely lifeless to the ground...

 

ummm.... finished? i cut up some scenes...

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sorry it came out pretty bad :_red_fox 5 i know i disappointed you

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ettooooo..

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-san, daijoubu.. in fact, the story was almost SO close to what I had in mind... You get a perfect mark once again..

Although, I would've liked to read the full story ;)

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i would rather not tell you the whole story *sweatdrop* it gets more bad... uuu... but i guess you wouldn't mind... well of course his brother will get mad and shoot the gang leader... by the way... the other girl with them was actually a high rank police and was also his older brothers girlfriend

 

i guess its my turn

 

c.o.d: suffocation, blood lost

t.o.d: 11:11pm

crime scene: hanged in the middle of a room, blood dripping from 3 slitted parts of her body (neck, left and right wrist), and all internal organs scattered inside the room

place: on a high school occult club room where she works as teacher

others: she was wearing full make-up and was formally dressed, her clutch bag was found at the music club room

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I'll take a witness role this time :p

 

"It was known for almost quite a while that there was a love affair going on on the school's ground.. Me, as a student, I never had any interest in what people used to spread of rumors and such.

On my way back home one day, I witnessed an incident in such our school music teacher was in a fight where she stood as the separating wall between two men.. Actually, one of them was a big guy around the 30s (I think he's another teacher at our school) and the other was a youngster.

The young guy seemed familiar when it came to my head that he's a student with us in the school. The teacher looked so stressed and embarrassed at that moment but I never stayed enough to figure out what was this all about.

The next day at school, that incident was the whole talk of all students and teachers. I only felt a bit sad about the condition of the teacher. Our music teacher seemed so nice and she never did anything suspicious but that incident changed her life.

Our school festival was coming closer by the time and we were all busy preparing for it. Our teachers were helping us and our supervisor was the sweet music teacher. We had a permission to stay over at night and she took the responsibility for it. At that night, another teacher came across our classroom to check on our progress, and what a coincidence, it was the same teacher who was in that fight the other day.

All students started mumbling about him being in a relation with the teacher and I was just sitting there listening to their mumbles. A few minutes later, a huge hit on the wall was heard and we all rushed out of the class to see what happened. Again, a fight was beginning and the same people were in it. The music teacher, the other teacher and that young student. I never had that teacher giving us lessons so I don't really know him, but the student is a year older than me and studies in the room next door.

things were getting worse and suddenly something caught my ears "Just leave her alone, you know she'll never be yours!" At that moment all kinds of thoughts came to my head. The one who said that was the old teacher, and the youngster hit him hard on the face after hearing that. The music teacher was doing nothing but crying and trying to calm them down. A quite while has passed while they were fighting but things came to an end and everyone went in a separate way. The young student was filled with rage as well as the old teacher.

We stayed the whole night working and students were talking all the time about that accident. I came to a conclusion which led me to think that our sweet and lovely music teacher has cheated on her boyfriend (the old teacher) with a young student. I knew it was bad to think about it that way but what i was hearing from all the students led me to this thought. Also, it seemed that the young student really loved our teacher and he was so desperate to stay with her..

No one knew how things would be like and the festival day came. Celebrating and having lots of fun with everyone. All teachers were here as well as all the students. While I was walking behind the school building I heard a noise. Walking slowly to see who it was, I could notice the music teacher standing there with the other teacher (her boyfriend). The atmosphere was cool and they were happy and that was the first time i saw them like that aside from all the fighting.. "Look at your best today and meet me at the music room at 10:30 PM after everyone is gone. I have a surprise for you..".. Her boyfriend told her that and I swear I could see her flying of happiness.. As for us students we weren't allowed to stay late without a permission but teachers could. I felt so happy for her when shockingly I saw the young student spying on them and his eyes were filled with rage.. He hit the wall with his fist and left saying "I'll show them!!"..

The day came to an end and all students were heading home. At the school gate the young student stayed standing behind a tree while all the others left. I was curious to know how things would be so I stayed as well. 2 hours have passed and the couple teachers came acting all lovey-dovey together. Observing the young student, he followed them. I followed all of them but I kept my distance. Apparently, I couldn't go any further and I stayed hiding at the entrance of the school building. It was getting late and I though I might need to go back home when a loud scream was heard.. I headed to the source of the scream where I found my music teacher killed.. "

 

who was it?? O.o the old teacher or the young student? why?

I'll leave that to you :p;)

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i think you choose the older teacher for your suspect mocchin... why? probably because of jelousy i guess... but if you go deeper i can say both of them... i kinda felt unsatisfied since you didn't tell how she come to be brutally killed like that... *sweatdrop* i was excited on hearing the process

ummm... i know i ain't allowed to state my own plot... but do you wanna hear my own plot? well of course its not a story though...

well i'll be waiting for your next case as always

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hehe.. thanks

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-san.. I was delighted to hear your response.. Also, I didn't say everything in the story because it would be tooooooo long more than it already is @_@

Btw, I'll be glad to hear your part of it :D

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-san... you might be right but i don't know if that's the answer (I won't say actually :p).. after all I'm just a witness ;)

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well i guess she was more of a sacrifice? since she was in fact killed inside the occult room... the club where she acts as the club advisor... it was truth the she was about to go to a date that day... but she was the type of person who isn't used on putting on make-up... so i think the killer was the one to do her make-up... as for why the music room... hmmm i think the killer wanted to hide something she possess

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hmmm, that takes the story to another dimension but i don't mind it ;)

 

next case :D

 

C.O.D: Lungs filled with water.

Place: Storehouse close to the beach.

T.O.D: 3:15 PM

Notes: His ID was found close to his body with prints that belonged to him and 2 other people. One of them is a girl and the other one is his work-mate.

 

Good luck ^w^

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Oh these sories are so interesting. I'm dying of curiosity about who the real culprit is.

 

For the new case, I think the work-mate was the culprit. Am I wrong again? :D

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-san.. have you read the game's description at the first page of this thread?

If not, read it please!

After all I can't say who's the culprit..

This game is only about giving stories as a witness to what happened according to the given information.

Therefore, I may apologize for not being able to say who's the culprit; because the culprit differs from one point of view to another. According to the people participating in this game..

If you would like, be my guest &

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-san's guest AND Participate in this game with us after you read the description..

Thanks and I'll be waiting for you ^w^

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i miss you mocchin foxy3 but my classes had started already so i'm totally inactive :_red_fox 5 i hope you can wait for my statement a bit longer
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oh please do join us dear foxy1 you can feel free to make any type of statement and you can either reveal the culprit or not if you would like :3

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-san i miss u more..i'll always be waiting for your statements also good luck with ur classes.. ^w^

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