Purifying The Impure (Horror Investigation RP)[Recruitment]

[「viviD]

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DONE. :"D

Wheee~~

 

Forgive me, for Yoshi is hard to describe. He's that odd. XD

[Tetsu]

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It's okay.

 

Are we going to start now? or better yet, should we wait for one more person?

[「viviD]

Let's start. :"D

While we're rp-ing, let's leave this open until one joins. ^^

[Tetsu]

Hmmn... I will start the roleplay then...

[Tetsu]

.... I think I will edit my bio and make myself the leader/owner of the crew, seeing no one took the role xD

[「viviD]

Haha, well, yeah.

You're our leader as the maker of this rp. XD

[Tetsu]

Finished making the roleplay guys~~~

 

now... I'll post ~~~

[Tetsu]

Posted..... !!! Everyone is free to reply now

[「viviD]

Taking SECOND! :"D

[「viviD]

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there's a problem in your post.

 

sVerrine first describe this:

A short while after that, the client, Shinichiro, knocked on the door and walked sternly into the room.

 

a contradiction between your,

Mr. Shinichiro Hastily open the room with a jolt.

and be sure not to use big letter on the first letter of the worlds like 'Hastily' unless it's after a dot or the first word in a sentence. c: but that's not important. XD

 

"Is this Society of Paranormal Studies?" He asked in a slightly disgusted tone.

disgusted tone...

from what sVerrine describe him, I don't think he'll have that tone. Though it doesn't matter, just pointing it out in my observation. o:

 

"Yes." Kouki answered "Is there a problem?" It seemed like kouki was on to something but it seemed as if, the usual of people underestimating our capabilities.

sVerrine's Aoba said that words, not Kouki. o:

 

 

 

There, just pointing it out to you. c: Remember to analyze the others post and all, that's one of the problems in an group rp, you have to think what the others posted and analyze or so.

 

Am I being mean? DX Aiiyaaah, I sounded like a know-it-all snob. I'm sorry! T__T

 

 

 

and guys, please quote what the others said like

 

"Yes."

Aoba said.

 

"Is there a problem?"

It seemed Aoba blah blah

 

 

less confusing for me. XD;

Thank you very much. ~

[Spell]

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Gahh >w

 

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Lol i was really tired when i wrote that haha

[Spell]

And thankyou for noticing that. I would of been in deep troublei f i kept on doing that haha x'D

[Tetsu]

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thank you for pointing that out. I thought he was controlling my OC...xD

 

anyway, i got some few issues as well but i wont ask u guys to change anything. Just be aware next time okay?

 

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you made a transition from 3rd to 1st person point of view. I suggest you keep using 3rd as its more convenient for everyone.

 

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we have yet to determine what's actually going on in the church. That's why i use a general term "evil".

[「viviD]

*thumbs up* Ain't no problem! If I made mistakes too, please point it out as well! :"D Because sometimes. Urk. @o@ I wouldn't notice until someone points it out with their amazing analyzing. XD

 

Oh yah, don't mind Yoshi skipping out. He'll be doing that a lot. *facepalm*

Even I can't control him. (And I'm the one who made him! o_o)

[Tetsu]

alright.. Same here. I'm sometimes just too dumb so if i'm in my too dumb moments and posts some otherworldly replies, pls spank me and correct me :3

[blurbur]

looooollll xD I'm glad we dont rip at each other throat about that type of stuff cuss I can get soooo off topic when im tired... The old rp place i went to had grammer nazis every whereeeeee...... and i felt like i was gunna die of the mental overload with criticisms.

[sVerrine]

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, sorry for that. I usually write my stories from the 1st person's view, so it became kind of a habit... I probably changed the persons unconsciously when posting it .

I'll be more careful next time ^^, thanks for pointing it out for me.

[Tetsu]

same with me

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. Especially when i finished writing some fiction in 1st person, I tend to write in 1st person the whole day xDD

 

and yesh

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this is a nice community right?

[blurbur]

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Haha yuppp x'D

[Tetsu]

haha I posted guys.... my reply is sorta messy so forgive me.. tell me if you find something odd.

[「viviD]

Done~

Your turn,

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. ;3

[sVerrine]

Done too

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Your turn~

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Your turnn!! ^v^

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's turn

 

 

anyway, while waiting, here's the sneakpeak for the next case

 

 

 

CASE 02: THE VENGEFUL TEXTER

 

 

The case will be about an anonymous phone number texting people, killing them from accidents later on. The ringtone (click the video) plays when that texter text/e-mails. The content of the text is the way how you will die (if you receive a message with "you will die by falling from the fifth floor", you will soon fall down from the fifth floor and die)

 

the idea came from (one missed call)

 

 

 

so... any suggestion.. changes opinions???