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Never Touch Ground

 

Another memory passes of you,

standing on the stage for a view -

I can't forget about it, even for a few.

How hard I try, it is true.

 

Beautiful girl,

don't fall down

because angels should never

touch ground.

 

And even if shadows pierce through,

they still dive into the blue.

Tears roll down calling the sense of a dew,

I still remember, I don't need a clue.

 

Beautiful girl,

don't fall down

because angels should never

touch ground.

 

That play of shadows,

I am sure about it,

it turned my heart in vivid smoky arrows.

And even though the voice is somehow narrow,

waiting for your promise is like standing on my own

golden yarrow.

 

Beautiful girl,

don't fall down

because angels should never

touch ground.

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One word: beautiful. The repeating strophe is *__*

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I love this part besides the one Dai mentioned :D

And even though the voice is somehow narrow,

waiting for your promise is like standing on my own

golden yarrow.

  • 4 weeks later...
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I just saw it. It's very moving, the rhythm is slow, it sounds like a lullaby, smth you could whisper, so soft. I like the chorus, it's what gives, in my opinion, that touch of lullaby to this beautiful poem. I might be wrong, but it's comforting. Great composition as always. Thank you.

  • 5 months later...
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I have only one thing to say, dear Saga

すごく綺麗ですね。言葉は感動的で悲しいですよ。

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