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YaoiOtaku's Music Box

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͒ Secret Garden ͒

 

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Organized by

Saga

̢Approved by

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.. Information

This month theme shall be Secret Garden,

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it.

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

the word 'Secret Garden' in the content.

 

.. Rules

* Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

* No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.

* Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

* Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.

* The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

* Post the final result on this thread.

* Read the rules again, just in case.

 

.. Prizes

Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

 

 

.. Song

 

.. Deadline

Stars: 07.06.2013

Ends: 30.06.2013

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I must say this is really interesting contest. I'll try my luck here, too. Sorry for my bad English, but I still hope somebody'll like it. :)

 

Recommendation: please read while listening to music. The lyrics start at 0:24

 

 

The Biggest Loss

 

It was just an ordinary day for an ordinary person like me,

I was living together with everybody as everyone in this plain world,

However this wasn’t enough, I wasn’t satisfied,

I craved to know more about this magic existence,

There were a lot of questions bursting inside my head,

My soul couldn’t let them go out of my mind,

 

And finally one fatal day, when I was walking nowhere,

Fate has abruptly decided to fulfill my innermost wishes,

Suddenly my senses became numb. I lost my track of time,

And then I saw a light in the black sky full of doubts,

I raised my hand to reach this strange presence of faith,

I felt a shiver ran down my spine all at once,

Thousands of unknown feelings started to frolic inside me,

I suddenly understood, I have found the secret garden of ambitions,

 

My empty soul was surrounded by all these familiar yet frustrating emotions,

 

Is this a curse or a blessing? Is this what my heart longed for? Will I ever remember who I was not so long ago?

 

And finally one fatal day, when I was walking nowhere,

Fate has abruptly decided to fulfill my innermost wishes,

Suddenly my senses became numb. I lost my track of time,

And then I saw a light in the black sky full of doubts,

I raised my hand to reach this strange presence of faith,

I felt a shiver ran down my spine all at once,

Thousands of unknown feelings started to frolic inside me,

I suddenly understood, I have found the secret garden of ambitions,

 

 

Now I know what a fool I’m for abandoning my true self.

 

 

 

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Done~~~~~

 

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No More…

 

Where have you been, my boy?

You’d know how long I avoided….

Do you think I’m just your toy?

C’mon, I’d be annoyed….

Don’t wanna be only a choice….

Shame on me, right now I’d die…..

 

 

Hey guy, don’t run away…

Don’t go and have more words to say…

I am still here and now I pray…

Please look back, right now OKAY?

Here to stay, please stay….

I run to you, I will…..

 

 

Stop right there, could you?

I’m reaching to you, it’s true…

How far to go for you?

Just give me a clue….

It’s the story of us two….

Tell me what I can be…….

 

 

All is bright and blank for me…

I can’t hear no I can’t see…

Please let me free…..

Be lover or enemy?

Say yes, if you agree…

Not you and me anymore……..

 

 

 

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I totolly free-styled...rolf

 

[starts from 0:25]

 

 

0:25 till 0:40

Here we go again,at this cage that past has made,

Searching for what we lost in this far away place,

Nowhere to hide and nowhere to return

Just a sword in our hands and a thick shield in our hearts.

 

 

0:40 till.....

Do we pay the sins of the past?

Is that the right way to get a warm heart?

What an irony to wish for that,

when we know very well what brought as apart.

 

Now i will search for my own peace of mind

Where there would me no war nor a fight

I will drown myself into this fantasy

Then i shall close my eyes and feel the harmony

 

This is your turn to feel regret

And this chaos around you is what you get

Paradise is far away from hell

But I shall guide your way back there.

 

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Uh! I like this contest! ^^

My first poem, I hope you like it! :)

 

 

 

BREAKDOWN

 

Strong is the land,

firm is the air and flat is the lake

all is quiet in the secret garden.

 

A drop, the water ripples

the wind, rustle of leaves

a seed that fall, it seems inert.

All is silent once again.

 

a chirping, at first weak

It grow, it fills the air

the seed sprouts, put down roots

that are destined to go deep.

The air is restless, the wind rises

the lake is agitated in a sudden fury.

 

It's an embrace of sounds

that collide and merge

in a dissonant harmony.

The earth trembles, shaken by a thousand tremors

everything is swallowed in an abyss.

only the seed remains, which has become tree.

 

Once again the tranquility is back

you can only hear the noise of the last fruit that falls.

At the end of everything only a dry tree has remained

and a rotten fruit on the ground.

 

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The garden at the row's end

 

 

Falling from sky but i don't care

I have no wings to break my fall

Was this a whim,only a dare?

For me it is and will be all

 

Unbroken bonds 's what i created

The strongest tie holds me in place

But you decide what will be,fated

Whatever is i'll only face

 

My heart still beats but just gets colder

It doesn't know how much will beat

Will we go on and can grow older?

Or burn now in this fire's heat

 

To touch a heart is to create

A beautiful and healing place

But it will vanish,dissipate

When you're no more to light my face

 

Oh,full of beauty is this garden

With flowers blooming where you go

But it can dry and disappear then

When it will be i'll never know

 

I don't give up i always go on

But there are things i just can't take

Don't go away please just don't be gone

Without you here don't want to wake

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Don't Come Near Me..

 

 

Don't come near me

Don't come here

Don't come near me

Don't come here

 

When you think you understand everything and run after me, you wrong

It's already late for you and you can't turn back to the way you are

So don't come after me and lost to your curiosity

It may look splendid now, but you better run away

Never think of me or wondering about me

Just think of yourself and go far away from me

 

It's surely draw your interest but don't ever come near me

Maybe it's look beautiful now, but you'll regret it later

Never think to close to me cause you'll regret it

Just run while you can and don't ever go near me

 

Cause you never understand me with all the lies I show you

The lies that made you crazy and will regret it later

Don't come after me cause you'll lost everything

Don't say you want to be with me cause you'll regret it

 

That sacred place which full of lies so you shouldn’t enter

It doesn't has any exit and you'll trapped inside

You'll regret it and it'll too late

You want comeback but it'll be useless

because this place is secret, no one can help

 

I said don't follow me, don't think to be with me

Cause you'll lost if you're not, so don't come after me

You can't go out when you're inside and i'm sure you'll regret it

This place is maze and keep in secret within the world

 

Don't come after me cause your regret will be too late

When you were trapped inside there will be no exit

Because this place is secret from the world where you exsist

You better stay away and stop thinking about me

 

Value your life and never think to come near this secret garden

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Intro : One day at the park~

 

 

 

 

Sketching an Eden~

 

I brought my canvas to the park,

What shall I sketch today~

Flora, sunsets, people and larks,

Silver hair in Golden rays…

He dances there again.

 

Gazing upon his graceful choreograph,

He dances in the Golden Light…

Sketching his features like a photograph~

How could around him be ever so bright?

Wonder if I’ll meet him again…

 

Through my sketch book,

I’ve sketched him more than I thought,

at him if I could look,

To quench my soul this draught.

Wait, is that him I see coming into this café?

 

They were mean to him,

his pale skin and white hair…

Isn’t his fault, I went to him.

(heart pounding, face flushing)

The world isn’t fair,

How about a sit with me?

 

He gazed back,

No one ever sees me.

Fingers through his silver locks,

I’ve got you…

He smiled “No one touches me.

Afraid albinism spreads…

You’re an artist I see…

Flipped through my sketch book did he…

 

He blushed and smiled,

and showed me pages of him…

I love capoiera…” said he..

If you will…

May you dance for me?

I asked with a smile.

 

So he danced while I sketched,

Until the Sun Sets~

Everything in the park didn’t matter…

We were in our Secret Garden~

He rested in me, I held him close…

 

He’s no longer alone, (He’s with me)

Everything lit Golden by the setting sun~

We gazed upon each other (I’ve got you)

Embraced the warmth of my pale lover~

A kiss to seal our love…

(I’ll love you forever…)

 

 

 

 

Outro : The golden sun sets, an eternal bliss~

 

P.S Hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing my poem/lyrics thingy.... xD

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Submitting a poem. Thank you for the opportunity to force myself to think of words that rhyme, I forgot how entertaining it was.

 

 

 

Don't Forget

 

Silence seems always around, when I need an answer its not outright

Evil tags me to the ground, and all I know is I have to fight

Cast away chains that surround, I won't let the past steal delight

Regret won't even keep me bound, I'll gain all I need to find insight

Engage the strength that can be found, keep it always to incite

Truth into me to keep lies drowned, and I'll move from black to white

 

And here's the secret, in the Garden is where we keep it.

So don't forget, to Silence Evil, Cast away Regret and Engage the Truth.

 

Grasp onto all that you have to say, hold it out for the world to sight

Alternative is just another way, always think about your plan of flight

Realise your potential today, don't let it die before it comes to light

Dream of all the impossible array, of things you can accomplish inspite

Eliminate the hurt, hate and betray, there's more to life that's only right

Neglect your doubts put them away, and together we can make a new tonight

 

In the Secret Garden is where it waits, I hope this truth inspires the fates.

So don't forget, to Grasp every Alternative, Realise your Dream and Eliminate all Neglect.

 

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Ok so I know this contest ended already but... I wanted to have some fun with this song as a backing track so...

 

Here are MY lyrics:

 

 

00:41

 

Why do you feel so ice cold

When I just want you to hold

I want us to be together

bound well in lace and leather

Inseparable bond between us

But will this ever be us?

Listen to your heart you'll know

Ill wait for you in the shadow.

 

01:10

 

I'll wait for you in the shadow

 

Grab a writing pencil to make my portfolio

Out the way peepz, you'll fall like domino

Freeze thaw so cold, you seem cocksure

Ain't nobody rolling back here you better withdraw

Royalty's here & it's all about the law

I see you sitting over there trying to keep a score

You open doors for me but I am a carnivore

I be eating chickens day and night when they see me soar

 

01:28

 

Yes yes this is how I be

I like to sing too but this aint no glee

Don't worry you just need to stop I implore thee

What you talking about lil mama yous a shorty

 

01:36

 

To be with you

My love's so true

This is my cue

To start anew

 

Spread my wings out

Carry no doubt

I can't do without

You by my side

 

01:51

 

Why do you feel so ice cold

When I just want you to hold

I want us to be together

bound well in lace and leather

Inseparable bond between us

But will this ever be us?

Listen to your heart you'll know

Ill wait for you in the shadow.

 

Hold my hand in the darkness

Don't fear the talks and gossips

Give me your love and promise

Together always exists

Our love will never eclipse

Caress your lips is true bliss

Is this a curse or blessing?

Is this what I've been missing

 

 

I decided to record the song so people could understand the WAY the lyrics should flow with the song...

You can find the Vocaroo audio

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My vocals suck and I tried to get the volume right so there would be clarity in my vocals but that was a mission O_O

 

 

Not uploading to enter the contest.

 

Just wanted to add something to the rest of all these other songs already made.

I hope someone can check out my song and let me know what they think.

I kind of let the theme "Secret Garden" go over my head XD sowie

 

 

Have a blessed week,

Dev xo

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Secret Garden Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Secret Garden Contest] is Dev with

their song lyrics 'Why do you feel so ice cold'.

 

As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

▦▦ Application for Spring themed Set ▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

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Thank you so much

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for this win, I am honored to have won. I don't normally win anything and for many years thought there was no point in ever trying. But this time i decided to attempt this contest with a new frame of mind, "I am doing it for fun and ONLY fun, show people I am capable and just do ME".

 

I guess a positive mental attitude helps with most situations in life :)

 

Thank you so much

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for stopping by to congratulate me ^_^

I am truly touched by these messages and appreciate the time you have taken to come here and write.

 

*gestures for a big group hug for Saga, Miya, 1978 and Fay*

 

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