☩ DoomsDay ☩

[Saga]

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☩ DoomsDay ☩

 

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Today,

.. Drop it.

Yesterday,

.. Recall it.

Tomorrow,

.. Catch it.

 

And you know it,

same like you,

I do breathe.

And you forgot it,

same like you,

I do bleed.

 

 

Today,

.. Drop it.

Yesterday,

.. Recall it.

Tomorrow,

.. Catch it.

 

How much time you need?

How many lives you wasted?

Open a book,

- Yes, your own book.

How many pages?

-Ah... no pages?

Close it.

- No,wait. Throw it.

 

Today,

.. Drop it.

Yesterday,

.. Recall it.

Tomorrow,

.. Catch it.

 

- Regrets? I see, too bad.

A sea of insanity,

a drop of sanity,

you are born - humanity.

 

Today,

.. Drop it.

Yesterday,

.. Recall it.

Tomorrow,

.. Catch it.

 

You can't smile?

How bad, you just missed the last second.

- Second?

Ah, right. Time.

- No, a second, a second of joy.

 

.. Catch it.

- What? Tomorrow?

.. Burn it.

- Yesterday?

.. Live it.

- Today?

No, but ''DoomsDay''.

 

~The lost prayer of a hopeless soul,

Nov. 25th, 2012

 

[Morinaga's Girl]

I love your poem, Saga-san! *___*

 

This is my favorite part of the poem *__*

- Regrets? I see, too bad.

A sea of insanity,

a drop of sanity,

you are born - humanity.

[Chibi-Seme Chidori]

My, my, this one is very nice. Very nice, indeed!

And just like Morinaga's Girl, I loved the part "A sea of insanity, a drop of sanity, you are born - humanity."

That was the part that really spoke to me the most.

I don't know how to explain the various emotions in this poem or how it affected me,

just that I've never read a poem that has inflected me feelings on such a level before.

Truly fascinating. :Red_fox7:

[mangotango]

I liked this one! It has a great rhythm to it... almost like a song (I think it'd be awesome to hear it performed like spoken word) :3 The repetition is great, too... I really enjoy this type of poem.

[yourstalker]

"Today,

.. Drop it.

Yesterday,

.. Recall it.

Tomorrow,

.. Catch it."

 

I wounder what "it" is.......I cannot comprehend it lacks that poetic flowing rhythm which is interesting it's short and sharp kind of like a haiku minus the syllable obsession I like it, even if this poem turned out to be about burning fluffy kittens with big blue eyes of innocence I'd still like it. Fun to read I envy your poetry skills ^^

 

Kinda cheesy that you worked the tittle into the poem though XD beautiful.

[jo_suzaku]

Ah. You've got style, Saga-san, You've got style.