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    Re: BL Writers - Goodnight Kiss [June'19]

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    What a sweet story! I kept re-reading the final detail for minutes. It’s so cute!!!
    But I’d love to see more of Daniel’s reaction when he received Luke’s text. Was that the usual thing? Would he be mad or sad or simply shrug it off? It’s like this part was omitted from your story and I personally think it would be better if you had included the character’s emotion there.
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    Thank you for a beautiful story. I totally understand that feeling when you got a seen after gathering all your courage to send the message. To be honest, I don’t like your interpretation of “good night kiss”. But it’s perfect for the story and I respect the story as how it is.
    Thank you both for your stories.

    Thank @[Only registered and activated users can see links. ] for the contest.

    I’m eager to see this month’s contest theme.

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