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Seeing the drops on the window is so nostalgic,

like I'm seeing the tears in your eyes.

These rainy days,

they could be so romantic,

but for me they are the thing that make me cry.

 

Remembering our first meet,

like it was yesterday.

This happy face which you made,

like you was a child,

like you didn't know,

how painful this world could be,

how much pain could you feel,

seeing the reality,

the reality which you thought was a nightmare,

the reality which separated us for ever.

 

Ah that innocent and pure eyes,

searching for a new life,

thinking that everything is like in a fairytale.

But yeah,you're other person now.

Your pureness disappeared with my betrayal,

with the stupidly mistake which I made,

the mistake that made us break up.

 

Ah these rainy days are so beautiful,

but it would be better,

if they didn't sound so sad.

It would be better if I didn't cry now.

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Posted

Very beautiful. This was my favorite part:

Seeing the drops on the window so nostalgic,

like I'm seeing the tears in your eyes.

A sad but beautiful poem...

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that's a lovely poem bloody, it was very touching..

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@Aoi,Mitsu Thank you ^_^ Glad you liked it : P

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@Kaoru Chan: Thank you,dear ^-^

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Beautiful poem, like the others said. Another sad poem but I have to recognize that is very well done..

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@Matti Heh (= Thank you..really.

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*hugs tightly* Bloody, dear girl, it's a very beautiful poem... gray colors in it.... very sad but full of feelings. You're improving a lot. Well done dear...

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@Bridget : -chuckles,hugging back- Ah,I don't know what to say Bridge...Thank you? For the warm words (=

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Very touching! I really liked it :)

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