Despair (not sure if this is really a poem just something I came up with)

[Ueda_Angel]

The cold night of despair returns again

I feel lost and alone each time I think of you.

Why must these thoughts and feelings fill my mind

You know what affect you have on me.

 

I try and try to forget the reason you entered my soul.

A one person embrace is more possible then an embrace with you

Maybe I am fooling myself. I should welcome the pain again.

Feeling agony is better then feeling nothing.

 

Keep in mind I've never tried to make you stay

So why is it you won't leave me when I want you to?

You only increase the pain each minute you're next to me.

What must I do to make you leave but still be by my side?

 

I'm not going to let it get to me anymore.

I'm not perfect so you better not expect me to be.

Take what you see in front of you or let it be from now on.

Either way I'll still be here waiting for the answer to an unasked question

[hama71]

 

Sorry... I am tire so... I don't know I did right or not...

Any there some thing going on in Photobucket...

I might have to find other place to post the image...

They start doing this restriction... --

[hinata--chan]

Lovely . As I read this I thought it would make a nice opening for a story . Good to see more works from you .

[BRIDGET]

The cold night of despair returns again

I feel lost and alone each time I think of you.

Why must these thoughts and feelings fill my mind

You know what affect you have on me.

 

I try and try to forget the reason you entered my soul.

A one person embrace is more possible then an embrace with you

Maybe I am fooling myself. I should welcome the pain again.

Feeling agony is better then feeling nothing.

 

Keep in mind I've never tried to make you stay

So why is it you won't leave me when I want you to?

You only increase the pain each minute you're next to me.

What must I do to make you leave but still be by my side?

 

I'm not going to let it get to me anymore.

I'm not perfect so you better not expect me to be.

Take what you see in front of you or let it be from now on.

Either way I'll still be here waiting for the answer to an unasked question

 

I Liked it very very much, the last 2 stanzas are beautiful & meaning to me. It's a poem as long as you consider it as one. Great job Ueda...

[Matti_19]

I like them a lot! Both Ueda_Angel's poem and Hama's work