Fight

[Saga]

Whisper in the night

your eyes are right

this is not the moon's light.

 

And you should know

I do not bow

and you should know

it's because you'll beg right in a row.

 

Whisper in the night

your eyes are right

this is not the moon's light.

 

If this nightmare doesn't end

for me,for you

what would be behind

ah,don't hide -

you do bite.

 

In a world where you cannot talk

In a world where you should be bold

I know, your mind just broke.

 

Whisper in the night

your eyes are right

this is not the moon's light.

 

You are a hypocrite

What do you think is pit?

And when you become a myth,

tell me again the world is not a hypocrite.

 

Whisper in the night

your eyes are right

this is not the moon's light.

 

My last words

be this man who struggle the most

because in my hypocrisy

you'd never find a mercy.

Ah, you were right

I am just called a "Fight".

[Aoi]

I like this poem a lot! Not to mention that the last part is just brilliant in my oppinion

[Saga]

I am glad you liked it,Aoi!

[Last_sky16]

i like ur poem...this is so my fav type of poems...well done...^^

[Saga]

Thank you,sky. (:

[Belita]

Very very good

[Saga]

Thank you!

[BRIDGET]

I found it powerful & with a good rhythm. I'm reading more poetry here than in my degree!

I enjoyed talking to you

Good job!

[Saga]

Thank you,Bridget!

I enjoyed talking to you as well. (: