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Reunion (Written for BRIDGET)


Ueda_Angel
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It seems like months or even years

Since I last saw your smile.

I never thought I'd miss this much

The wait has been worth while.

 

I see you standing on the train

A few feet from my arms.

You look in to my tear filed eyes.

And dazzle me with your charm.

 

You walk to me mouth smiling

While you locate my own.

You cannot wait until we leave

Until we are alone.

 

The passerbys all stop to stare

Can't seem to understand

How such a touching unity

Is shared by two grown men.

 

I break the kiss and look at you.

I see it in on your face.

You have just one thought on your mind

Let's continue at my place.

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thank you very much, it's a very beautiful poem, you are very beautiful poem. It's true when I say it made me cry, keep pong please. I enjoyed it very very much

Thanks a million

the sweetest kiss

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I still have this pain in my stomach... --;;;

I just want to do this...

I hope Ueda_Angel and BRIDGET like this... ^^

I use Takumi-kun manga Pure 2... ^^

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I still have this pain in my stomach... --;;;

I just want to do this...

I hope Ueda_Angel and BRIDGET like this... ^^

I use Takumi-kun manga Pure 2... ^^

 

I just love it! very touching!

I hope you recover soon!

thanks a lot hama71

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I just love it! very touching!

I hope you recover soon!

thanks a lot hama71

 

I am glad you like it..

Well this time... I need more rest then before...

Sorry to make you guys worry... T T

You're welcome!

Enjoy your poem!

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I am glad you like it..

Well this time... I need more rest then before...

Sorry to make you guys worry... T T

You're welcome!

Enjoy your poem!

 

 

Scary thing is I had that couple in my head when I was writing the poem. Weird huh? Arigatou Hama71 for doing such a great job sprucing up my poem. I'm glad you guys think they're good enough to be used for a piece of work like that. Hopefully more poems to come if I get over this stupid writer's block completely.

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Scary thing is I had that couple in my head when I was writing the poem. Weird huh? Arigatou Hama71 for doing such a great job sprucing up my poem. I'm glad you guys think they're good enough to be used for a piece of work like that. Hopefully more poems to come if I get over this stupid writer's block completely.

 

Well I thought about it... there was other one too but, I think you might had this image in your mine...

I am just glad you like the way I put it...

I just hope you get over that writer's block soon...

And I just hope I get better soon too... --;;

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