Ueda_Angel Posted September 13, 2011 Posted September 13, 2011 (this poem was written for a good friend who deserved it Rei (hugs) thanks for being such an inspiration) You claim your eyes are just for me You say that you're all mine So tell me when I look away Your eyes start to defy I sense the lust you start to feel When I move from your side Is that meant for the one you love Or the lover you're trying to hide. I tell you those three simple words And although you say them back. I cannot help but block them out Cause I know it's not a fact. I watch you from afar you know. you think you're all alone. Well better make sure that they're the one Cause I'm leaving you on your own. Jealousy is not the way I feel when I see you. It is more like feeling free 'Cause now I know what's true. 8
Rei Posted September 13, 2011 Posted September 13, 2011 So beautiful! You made such a good poem! I think your writer's block is gone Thanks!
Matti_19 Posted September 13, 2011 Posted September 13, 2011 A very good poem, as always from Tat-chan! Hope we'll all receive such a cute poem as well
cherryyuri Posted September 13, 2011 Posted September 13, 2011 you're writting again! yay! beautiful poem tat-chan! =]
hama71 Posted September 13, 2011 Posted September 13, 2011 I could find the image I was thinking about... But, I think this work out too.. This is background from Nana's fan HP... Nana's story has some of story line go with you poem... I hope you like it... ^^ 3
BRIDGET Posted September 13, 2011 Posted September 13, 2011 I could find the image I was thinking about... But, I think this work out too.. This is background from Nana's fan HP... Nana's story has some of story line go with you poem... I hope you like it... ^^ Hama71, what a beautiful thing you did with Ueda's poem.... You mean Nana by Ai Yazawa? I love that story, so sad when she stopped drawing...
BRIDGET Posted September 14, 2011 Posted September 14, 2011 I liked it very much. I don't like poetry very much but yours is very beautiful, I'll read the rest of them....
Ueda_Angel Posted September 14, 2011 Author Posted September 14, 2011 I didn't think you guys would like this poem so much. Funny what I can come up with on a whim huh?
hama71 Posted September 14, 2011 Posted September 14, 2011 I could find the image I was thinking about... But, I think this work out too.. This is background from Nana's fan HP... Nana's story has some of story line go with you poem... I hope you like it... ^^ Hama71, what a beautiful thing you did with Ueda's poem.... You mean Nana by Ai Yazawa? I love that story, so sad when she stopped drawing... That is why... I could see her work for quit some time... I wonder what happen... I am glad you like this... ^^ I didn't think you guys would like this poem so much. Funny what I can come up with on a whim huh? Well as I saying alway... you are good... I just hope this image is o.k. with your poem... --;;;;;
Ueda_Angel Posted September 14, 2011 Author Posted September 14, 2011 I just hope I can get over my writer's block completely. I hate when I get it!
hama71 Posted September 14, 2011 Posted September 14, 2011 I just hope I can get over my writer's block completely. I hate when I get it! What is writer's block? I hope you get over too... even I am not sure what that mean... --;;; I did one more... I still can't find the image I am looking for... -- I know I have one just don't know where... This is bad thing about having too much... --;;; 3
Ueda_Angel Posted September 15, 2011 Author Posted September 15, 2011 What is writer's block? I hope you get over too... even I am not sure what that mean... --;;; I did one more... I still can't find the image I am looking for... -- I know I have one just don't know where... This is bad thing about having too much... --;;; Writer's block is a period of time when I or any other writer get to a point where no matter how hard we try we can't come up with any ideas for stories poems etc. And the things we do come up with don't flow as easily as we would like. Basically when we lose all inspiration and dont' know what to write. That's my definition of it at least.
Macys Posted September 15, 2011 Posted September 15, 2011 Thank you for this wonderful poem Tat-chan! It's so well done and so deep, really loved reading it! :leaf3:
hama71 Posted September 15, 2011 Posted September 15, 2011 Writer's block is a period of time when I or any other writer get to a point where no matter how hard we try we can't come up with any ideas for stories poems etc. And the things we do come up with don't flow as easily as we would like. Basically when we lose all inspiration and dont' know what to write. That's my definition of it at least. That was What I thought so too... but didn't want to guess... ^^;;; Well I hope you get over that soon... For me I don't get that much... Just getting to do it is more problem... I just can't get feeling wanting to write kind of feeling... I have everything just don't have get to mood to do is much harder... --;;;
hinata--chan Posted September 16, 2011 Posted September 16, 2011 Awesome love this . Beautifully said .
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