Ueda_Angel Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 It starts with a look A touch of a hand A gentle gesture You look into my eyes I see no doubt that you want me I reach for your face Caressing you petal soft skin Your kisses begin I look into your mind I see no doubt that you love me You reach for my shirt The fabric is a barrier You want to see more of me I look into your heart I see no doubt that you need me. I stop your hand I hold you close I want to wait for the right time I look into your soul I see no doubt that you'll wait with me 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 oo very nice, very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 I like it a lot tat-chan... And you say it might be crappy... silly girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 ooooh! I like it! i'm such a fan of poetry in fluid-like motion and this one has it. i love how it flows with just the right amount of intensity and simplicity. very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata--chan Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 Love it so sweet . So romantic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 3, 2011 Share Posted September 3, 2011 I hope I didn't ruin your poem... --;; I thought about using 2rd Takumi-kun love scene for this... Then... I change to this... I hope you like it... ^^;;; 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Author Share Posted September 6, 2011 I hope I didn't ruin your poem... --;; I thought about using 2rd Takumi-kun love scene for this... Then... I change to this... I hope you like it... ^^;;; I loved this except for one tiny detail...you spelled my name wrong you put 'angle' instead of 'angel' lol. Otherwise thank you for this. I'm honored you would do this for my poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 6, 2011 Share Posted September 6, 2011 I loved this except for one tiny detail...you spelled my name wrong you put 'angle' instead of 'angel' lol. Otherwise thank you for this. I'm honored you would do this for my poetry. I am trying to fix all the name right now... I was put in wrong name in the my file... --;;; I did all wrong... T T I am really sorry!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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