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I write this poem about a month ago in my Japanese blog...

Well I didn't write in Japanese I write in English... ^^

I kind of like it so I made this...

Enjoy! ^^

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It's so lovely and heartfelt. :)

i really like the emotions here. i know it's supposed to be a sad poem but it does sound hopeful and positive too.

 

oh yeah...i've written a couple of BL poems too. Wanton Euphoria and the MisuShin-inspired poem A Love Undefined. i would like to know what you think of them. :) Thanks.

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It's so lovely and heartfelt. :)

i really like the emotions here. i know it's supposed to be a sad poem but it does sound hopeful and positive too.

 

oh yeah...i've written a couple of BL poems too. Wanton Euphoria and the MisuShin-inspired poem A Love Undefined. i would like to know what you think of them. :) Thanks.

 

I will try to read tomorrow when my head is much clear...

I am so sleepy... it almost mid night... --;;;

If I could make it I will make background for your poem too...

So see you later... ^^

And thank you...

You got the right message... ^^

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what a sweet but sad poem of love gone but maybe will be found again. Good metaphor with the empty jar very clever. Enjoy reading your poems Hama you have such talent. You probably have many books filled with many poems written.

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what a sweet but sad poem of love gone but maybe will be found again. Good metaphor with the empty jar very clever. Enjoy reading your poems Hama you have such talent. You probably have many books filled with many poems written.

 

Thank you!

Well I didn't write quit long time...

And most of my poem was done by in Korean... ^^;;;

I try to keep up but just don't get that feeling of wanting to write... --;;;

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