The Story Of YELLOW!

[misakixusagi]

:hamtaro-005 (1): ok guys, ive just been working on this over the past hr or so as i thought 'hey im gonna write a poem to depict/explain/show my favourite BL manga YELLOW'(makoto tateno) well this is what happened, so please let me know what you think-im quite pround of this, i think i did quite well lol It's called the story of yellow

 

 

My hands and your hands touch but only just cause when

I look into your eyes I can only see lust.

 

It makes me sad cause I love you so much I try

To protect you even though you just keep pushing me aside.

 

We’ve spent every day together and I know that you feel it too,

That we’re closer now we’ve been through hell and saved our souls that fell.

 

You come to me and say ‘Dai suki’, I say don’t joke and you walk away,

I realise what you meant to say was ‘Ai shite ru’ this day.

 

I hold you close and keep you warm, our lips and bodies now entwined,

I never want you let you go you’ve given me too much time.

 

I blink! Its over! You disappear! I stare! You lied!

I wonder why it’s always me and why you try to hide.

 

I’ll kick and shoot those bastards to get you back don’t ever think I can’t,

Ill drag you back to be with me, it won’t be our final dance.

 

The pleasure, the pain, how have we made it here,

But I got you and you got me that’s all there is my dear.

[lotusflower]

brava!!!^_^

my fav was "But I got you and you got me that's all there is my dear"

lust,love and beauty build a world

[misakixusagi]

your words mean loads lotusflower thanks so much x

[현애]

wah so cute~~~~love it...

[Guest RoseMary]

I’ll kick and shoot those bastards to get you back don’t ever think I can’t,

Ill drag you back to be with me, it won’t be our final dance.

 

Oh my.i love these sentences the most.

so kutie and lovely.

[animegirl]

I like this poem very very much! :leaf3:

[misakixusagi]

thanks guys, it means loads that u like my poems, as im not very confident they r any good x

[Amander123]

Wow your poem is so beautiful! You have inspired me so much that I want to try to write a BL poem too

[brohne]

This is awesome! I've never read this manga, but I want to now from reading this. The imagery your words convey is so touching.

[misakixusagi]

ha ha cool ,the manga is amazing i read all 4 volumes at least once a month

[K]

:hamtaro-005 (1):

 

My hands and your hands touch but only just cause when

I look into your eyes I can only see lust.

 

I’ll kick and shoot those bastards to get you back don’t ever think I can’t,

Ill drag you back to be with me, it won’t be our final dance.

 

 

 

. .these were the lines i was attracted to,

 

. .the first line, for me, says " you just hold my hand not because you want it but because you want something beyond it "

 

. .and the next line just simply says " never giving up on you, i'll be brave to fight for my love for you "

 

 

. .i say, this poem is so WONDERFUL :msn_red_fox 6