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A pretty short poem about 2 guys who are in love and one of them encourages the other one to tell his family about their love

 

 

Hold my gaze

And dry your tears

Fake a smile

Hide your fears

 

Hold my gaze

And tell a lie

Close your eyes

Start to cry

 

Hold my gaze

I'll share your pain

Take my smile

Love again

 

Hold my gaze

Pretty boy

And tell them

You're not a toy

 

Hold my gaze

I'm your guy

Tell them too

Don't be shy

 

Hold my gaze

I'll help you through

Don't forget

I'm here for you

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Awwww... sooooooooo cute! I love it so! :leaf15:

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Awwww that is so cute :Red_fox7:

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if another guy gives me this poem as a present XD...............i may cry out loud....:))))

so cute XD

 

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ah.....

i suddenly think that...

if there's a scene in BL film that....one guy sings a beautiful song for his lover ) >...it would be great ^O^~

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Yeah, right! The poem is so sweet! I'd melt down if I were in that guy's place! Really, I'd be speechless! :msn_red_fox 15

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me 2......XD

cant say anything but.................hug and kiss him

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awwwww, its sweet! all the awsome guys that would say that r taken

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Very good. The first two strophes in particular.

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooo cute :Red_fox7:

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so nice i like that too....i want to write poem but im not good to it hihihi...Gomen

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so nice i like that too....i want to write poem but im not good to it hihihi...Gomen

 

lol... I would write a poem too... but I'm not good either:msn_red_fox 2

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I like it.

 

You should turn this into a song.

 

It has a melodic touch to it.

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Awwww :cuteonion57:Sooo cuuute :cuteonion41:

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Super adorable and super cute~! I absolutely love it! Good job!

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cool poem, i like it ^_^ oh and ichi kun i like ure signiture picture :D xx

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That was a sweet poem, words of encouragement for the boy to be honest and declare his love for someone who just happens to be another boy.

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