jo_suzaku Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 This is my first shot at writing a BL poem. I do hope you all like it! Rating: 18+, to be on the safe side. - The Runaway - Reveal hidden contents - "We live to love not love to live" Said the boy to the man. "Is this all you have to give?" And with that, away he ran. "How on earth am I going to survive?" Said the man to his friend. "Oh there are ways to keep you alive" For run-away love is not the end. "Do you think he will come back?" Sighing he lay in bed all night. "My days are long and nights are black" No, this doesn't feel so right. "There's a fine girl who is looking for some fun" The friend smirked and said to the man. "C'mon Sire, say yes or she may run" He was jumping into the fire from the pan. "Oh my, you have the most beautiful body" Said the lady to the man. "Lady, I don't think I can give you this body" Softly, he whispered before he ran. "Do you think he will come back?" Sighing he lay in bed all night. "My days are long and nights are black" No, this is the complete opposite of right. "How on earth am I going to live?" Said the same man to his wife. "What is that you want to give?" Those words cut through him like a knife. "We live to love not love to live" Said the boy to the man. "Is this all you have to give?" And with that, away he ran. - Image & Poem By: - Jo - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. So, so beautiful! I love the poem, the rhyme, the sadness, everything! Also I like the image you draw for it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suida Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 there should be an extra "like" button for the sketch ^^ it's really well written thanks for sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted April 23, 2015 Author Share Posted April 23, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. : Thank youu so so much! I am so glad you enjoy reading my poems. It feels lovely to get such nice reviews from you all the time. Thanks again ^^ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Thank you so much, especially for the extra "like" on my random doodle! Thanks again for reading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Yes, I'm slowly becoming your faithful reader. You write so so good. I like the sadness and melancholy in your poems. I also think you'd be a great fiction writer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaoifangirl Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 Poor man! :No!: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted April 24, 2015 Author Share Posted April 24, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. : Really? O_O' I haven't tried writing an original fiction or anything as yet. But that's mainly because I usually don't finish what I start. Maybe I'll try something out soon? But thank you! Your words of encouragement mean a lot ^_^ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. I know right? Maybe he just found himself unlucky in love ^^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akito18 Posted May 16, 2015 Share Posted May 16, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. The flow and all was superb! Love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted May 17, 2015 Author Share Posted May 17, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Thank you so much! Glad you loved it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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