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Incentive (HuaLian from 天官赐福 / Heaven Official's Blessing)


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Fandom: 天官赐福 | Tiān Guān Cì Fú | Heaven Official's Blessing by Mòxiāng Tóngxiù

Fanfiction title: Incentive

Pairing: Hua Cheng/San Lang + Xie Lian

Rating: +18 | explicit content for mature readers

Status: Oneshot - completed

Summary: Xie Lian wants to give Hua Cheng a little motivation in improving his calligraphy skill. Hua Cheng is more than happy to accept.

Disclaimer: Original characters and story are the creations of the respective author; the fanfiction is solely the work of my imagination and my writing ability. You can also find my works in Ao3.

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I'm not sure I heard about Heaven Official's Blessing before, if I did, I forgot the name immediately. However, I enjoyed this oneshot a lot. It seems every time I read something you wrote I like it more and more, so keep it up!

I have a few highlights too.

  On 10/6/2021 at 2:18 PM, 3ruri said:

To be honest, Xie Lian thought that Hua Cheng had made good progress. 

Somewhat acceptable.

Averagely.

It could do some work.

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Hilarious, made me laugh and had me hooked. 

  On 10/6/2021 at 2:18 PM, 3ruri said:

since the night they became husband and wife

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Wife? This part took me a little out of the story, I would have expected 'husband and husband' there. 

  On 10/6/2021 at 2:18 PM, 3ruri said:

“I think this is my best work yet,” he said, smirking triumphantly.

 

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You know what? I agree, Hua Cheng, marvellous work. 

Overall I really liked the relationship between Xie Lian and Hua Cheng, they seem so very devoted to each other, and the story was both cute and hot. 

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 I’m surprised that you would read it because I know you’re not that familiar with the fandom, but thank you very much. You’re always my #1 biggest supporter. Me so happy :o

About the “husband and wife” thing, I would normally use “husband and husband” in my writing, but from what I see in MoXiang TongXiu’s work so far, she always refer the couples as “husband and wife”. So for couples from her works, I would be referring them that way as well.

I hope to see more works from you too!! 
 

ps: I think you saw my review on the animation that I shared on twitter, so you did hear about it before 
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  On 10/6/2021 at 11:11 PM, 3ruri said:

from what I see in MoXiang TongXiu’s work so far, she always refer the couples as “husband and wife”. So for couples from her works, I would be referring them that way as well.

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Oh! I see. Well, then you were very in character, good job! 

  On 10/6/2021 at 11:11 PM, 3ruri said:

ps: I think you saw my review on the animation that I shared on twitter, so you did hear about it before 

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You are right. I just checked, the title of the review is the Chinese name so I didn't really look past that, haha. My bad. 

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  On 10/7/2021 at 12:53 PM, Kujaku said:

Well, then you were very in character, good job! 

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Heheheh thank you ;)

  On 10/7/2021 at 12:53 PM, Kujaku said:

the title of the review is the Chinese name so I didn't really look past that

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It also took me a long time memorizing the Chinese title too...but I thought, if we could remember Japanese title easily to use them, why not treat the Chinese title the same, well, at least I told myself that.

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