Destiny.Fate Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 I look at you calmly as you tell the truth Listening to the conversation between him and you When did his shadow appeared between us Like a fool I’m watching you two grew close this fast (Did I think too much) The distance between you and me seem to grew (You don’t seems to care) Don’t care if you’ll be misunderstood Whenever I see you looking at him The pain keeps coming, my heart keeps tearing You have never once (towards me) done it It became a habit that I foolishly allows it You are not the one for me Cos’ you held my hands but think of him This is not how my love could be I’ll let you find the happiness that you deem So just go cos’ you are one I no longer wish to see There isn’t enough love, you said as I let go without feeling sad Why does parting time brings cruelty And your eye cannot see when my heart bleeds Now you turn and want me back Life without me was just a mess I said thank you but sorry too I can’t accept and be a fool I no longer expect for a beautiful ending I no longer believe you’re the one I’m waiting So please don’t say you can’t lose me Because it’s you whom have taken the hopes from me When you say you missed him I know my love you no longer needs It’s now too late as I already left Regrets are no longer necessary Let you go, and let me live freely I don’t believe when you deny feelings for him I don’t want to listen ‘bout your feelings for me Shutting my ears as I don’t wish to hear My heart slowly dies as it’s bleeding with tears To the one I once loved, Goodbye =========================== 冷静地看着你 对我说出心里话 耳朵里听你说着 所有关于他的对话 我们之间什么时候开始有了他的影子 我就像个傻瓜看着你们靠近彼此 难道是我想太多吗 我和你的距离 好像无声无息的远去 你也似乎不太在意 不在意我是否会 因而对你误会 (你不在乎) 每当看见你望着他时 (胸口的痛) 不断涌上撕裂着我 那是你从来没有对我做过的事 是我傻傻的让一切 就此发生在我的眼前 我不能要这样的你 拉着我手 心里想着另一个他 我的爱无法分享 所以让我放手 才能让你追逐幸福 你走吧 我不再需要你 你说我让你走 是因为我爱不够 轻易的放开手 甚至没有一点感受 残忍的话为何在分手十分格外清晰 我的心在哭泣你的眼却看不清 现在你转身 要我原谅你 你说没有我的生活怎会那么难过 我说谢谢你 但是对不起 我没有再次接受你宽容的心 不再期望 我们 还会有美丽结局 不再相信 你是 我等待的那个人 所以 不要再说 你不想失去我 因为 我已对你死心 （噢~） 听你说你心里想着他 就该明白 你不需要我给的爱 后悔已经来不及我已慢慢离去 不需要无谓的挽留 让你走让我更加自由 你说你对他不是真心 我不相信 你说我还是在你心里 戴上心碎的耳机我不想听你说 流血的心慢慢死去 Goodbye我曾经爱过的你 Thanks for reading!! 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FuyuNoSemi_Fan Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 did you make that ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destiny.Fate Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 @FuyuNoSemi_Fan I'll humbly say yes. Mostly, i wrote in Chinese and then translate them to English. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FuyuNoSemi_Fan Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 I'll humbly say yes. Mostly, i wrote in Chinese and then translate them to English. Waauw that's so amazing good job XD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 It is awesome! I really love this poem, so sad, so full of emotions, it makes you so sad while reading it, which is a very good think, as it means you expressed your feelings so well. You did a very good job once again! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 It's....fantastic You rock love... *__* Big big kiss :*** 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destiny.Fate Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 @FuyuNoSemi_Fan Thanks a lot for liking it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destiny.Fate Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 @Rei Thanks for the compliment and thanks reading it!! I'm really happy to hear that I've managed to convey the feelings of sadness out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destiny.Fate Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 @Belita Thanks for the compliment. I shall let you in to a small little secret. Remember i told you i'm keeping both Spell and Light fanfic of yours? I had Spell printed out and I brought it with me so that I could read during my journey to work. Which means... you can read this poem/lyrics in "Hana-san's" point of view too... (of cos, i've added more stuff in to create the emotion) I hope you don't mind me getting some help from Hana-san... do you? This entry is nothing without your fic. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 Really!!!! OMG!!!! Are you kidding me?! XD I loved it.... How come from a shitty thing like that you did this?! It's so so good ;___; But i'm still happy that it managed to pull out this from you It's really good sweetie *___* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destiny.Fate Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 Hey Belita! What's a "shitty thing"?? Your fic is a fantastic thing! a novel i would call it! I'm glad that you like it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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