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Summary: Asami and Takaba going around playing house. Stuff happens. Because things (never really) change.

Status: Complete

Warnings: Hmm... cranky humor, un-romance and trashy action?

 

Title: Floating In Between, Where Our Worlds Collide

Author: JenovaVII

Fandom: You’re My Loveprize In Viewfinder, by Yamane Ayano

Timeline: Post-Pray In The Abyss (probably); approx. five years later.

Pairing: Asami/Takaba/Asami

 

Rating: M, overall.

 

Author's note: Really long and naggy A.N. ahead; either read or don’t.

 

 

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CHAPTER I (part one)

 

Dogs Are Loyal To Their Owners

 

Chapter rating: T for some language and (not really) kind of sexual situations?

 

 

 

 

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CHAPTER I (part two)

 

Dogs Are Loyal To Their Owners

 

 

 

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I'd really appreciate some criticism because I don't know if this is worth the time it takes to write/read. (:

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Sweetheart it DOES, please do keep going!! :p

 

Sorry i'm not very good at criticizing anything but i have to say i loved the fanfic theme....obviously :D

 

Please do keep it up, it's well built, well written, nothing else i can ask for...

Just waiting for the steamy smexy scenes anxiously *__*

 

Thank you :)

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A.N.: I write chapters that stubbornly insist they'll come later instead of right now – when I need them. I have like seven or more chapters written on the computer, and the devil knows how many more drabbles scratched on paper, but I keep having to write the next after the ones I post because new ideas pop and there's always something I have to add and change and connect and stuff. My cats are stupid and I'm out of cigarettes.

 

As I said before this is my first fan fiction and so, this one is also my first time writing an intimate scene; so bear with me. Also, I'm wondering since the first chapter if I'm being able to write the characters, at least a bit, well… in character. So tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it. Feel free to criticize; I enjoy criticizing and receiving critiques. (:

 

 

CHAPTER II (part one)

 

Gulp It Down; Lick Your Lips Clean

 

Chapter rating: M, for language and sexual situations.

 

 

 

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CHAPTER II (part two)

 

Gulp It Down; Lick Your Lips Clean

 

 

 

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  Belita said:
*__*

 

Me wants one of those.........

Can i have him?! :D

 

So freakin' hot....Damn :p

 

 

Thank you, Bela. I'm glad you're liking it. (:

 

P.S.: Nope, you can't have them/him. -evil snicker-

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wow O_O your really good , i am not flattering you but telling u what i think

because you really did imitated those 2, keep up the good work

i am copying it ..for myself.

Don't worry i won't sell your work :D

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  sarah3161 said:
wow O_O your really good , i am not flattering you but telling u what i think

because you really did imitated those 2, keep up the good work

i am copying it ..for myself.

Don't worry i won't sell your work :D

 

Yeah wow... Thank you, Sarah, it's really good to know you're enjoying the read.

That last part made me laugh; I doubt you'd make any profit with it. :p

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CHAPTER III

 

Rain. Droplet. Puddle. Lake. Sea. Ocean.

 

Chapter rating: R, for language and sexual situations.

 

 

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Chapter IV

 

Lifestream

 

Chapter rating: R, for language and implied and/or sexual situations; tentative of rape, non-con

 

 

 

A.N.: Every non-explained appearances, not-properly-introduced characters and enigma-like sentences are on purpose. It will be explained later. Probably. (At least it's supposed to.) Although I think I suck at it and it's so obvious and— Four cats sleeping in my room; one cat sleeping on the chair, one cat sleeping on my bed, one cat sleeping at my feet, one cat sleeping on my lap. Now I need my daily dosage of One Piece. Mystery dosage. All hail chapter four.

 

Confession: I mistyped 'Tabaka', not only once during the writing of this chapter but twice. (Had never done it before, surprisingly.) I mean; sure, he is indeed an idiot but… Oh well.

 

 

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Jenow, I love this story!

It's totally your style and very, very fitting for Viewfinder! I told you your writing is wonderful :)

I like the constant twist aand turns in the story, makes the reader want to know more.

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  Rei said:
Awesome Jenow!!! (the story, not you :p) I like a lot the way you built the story so far, the dialogues, so in the Viewfinder style

 

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Very good chapter, as I was expecting from you! Hope you'll have lots of inspiration and we won't have to wait too much for the next one. :p

 

 

Thank you Rei, Matt. I'll try not to disappoint in the next chapters. (:

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You are keeping this so damn good, it pleases me deeply to come here and find A NEW CHAPTER!!!

Didn't even know you had written another ;___;

 

Damn....

 

It was delicious...as alwasy dear :D

Just keep them coming *__*

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  Belita said:
You are keeping this so damn good, it pleases me deeply to come here and find A NEW CHAPTER!!!

Didn't even know you had written another ;___;

 

Damn....

 

It was delicious...as alwasy dear :D

Just keep them coming *__*

 

Thank you, Bela. It's good to know it's keeping you interested. (:

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