yojichan Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 You are my sun You shine on me too brightly it hurts my eyes You wake me up when I don't want to You beat on me when I don't need you to Times like these I wonder why I even bother Times like these I think of you as a bother Times like these I want to sink lower than ever But you grin at me like I need you to Why won't you leave me alone Why do you keep following me Why do you have to wake me from my dreams Please let me go now, I need more sleep But you never listen This is how our routine has always been You smile on me when I don't need you to You watch while I throw a pillow at you You grin at my profanities You just keep shining brighter than ever You know I can't let you go You take too much pleasures in my anxieties You know that in a few minutes I will follow you My face always defy what I truly feel for you You know that I love you You know that I can't live without you So even if I need more slumber Your rays keep reaching me further You love it when I squirm underneath you You love it when I scream to stop you This is a weird setup if you must know Taking too much fun in each other's annoyance We love each other too much to let go of this penance Because you know I can't live without you Because you know I always betray my feelings for you Because you know that underneath this frown is a chuckle And you know how happy you make me feel doing what you do. AUTHOR NOTES: This is something i have written way back when. the inspiration was so much different. but as i read it now, i can't help but relate this to Misu's perspective on his relationship with Shingyouji. My MisuShin-inspired poem "A Love Undefined" was taken from Shingyouji's perspective. "You are my Sun" is from Misu. I hope you enjoy. :hamtaro-005 (6): 8
Last_sky16 Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 OMG...u really presented Misu feelings...i can feel it...and good choice of choosing 'sun' to resemble shingyouji... i do think him as Misu's sun...he is that bright...lol 2
yojichan Posted September 20, 2011 Author Posted September 20, 2011 OMG...u really presented Misu feelings...i can feel it...and good choice of choosing 'sun' to resemble shingyouji... i do think him as Misu's sun...he is that bright...lol oh thank you sweetheart! *hugs* when i read this poem from my notebook...i couldn't help smiling as well. Shingyouji does represent the sun to Misu while Misu is Shingyouji's world ♥.
Last_sky16 Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 i know right??...both of us could feel it...before this i ady think shingyouji as his sun and im so happy yojichan think as the same..^o^ the way he looks at shingyouji when in that scene...gosh itz so EXTREMELY sweet!!!! *rolling on my bed* and yojichan u are so amazing for using tht scene wisely..*salute* 1
yojichan Posted September 20, 2011 Author Posted September 20, 2011 i know right??...both of us could feel it...before this i ady think shingyouji as his sun and im so happy yojichan think as the same..^o^ the way he looks at shingyouji when in that scene...gosh itz so EXTREMELY sweet!!!! *rolling on my bed* and yojichan u are so amazing for using tht scene wisely..*salute* we do tend to think alike where MisuShin is concerned. heheheh! we love them so much. ♥ they're always so beautiful together. the way they love each other. the way they need each other's presence. it feels so good. i am so in love with them both. they make me happy.
Last_sky16 Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 we do tend to think alike where MisuShin is concerned. heheheh! we love them so much. ♥ they're always so beautiful together. the way they love each other. the way they need each other's presence. it feels so good. i am so in love with them both. they make me happy. hmmm...yeah...itz a bit concerned but we cant avoid it whenever it comes to MisuShin....lol u know i never fell in love with a BL couple as deep as this before... i could spend my whole day talking bout them without getting bored...>w
hama71 Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 I just don't have much picture of this two... --;;; So I just did this way... Shingyouji in white and Misu as Black... If you don't like it... I will make other one... ^^ 4
Ueda_Angel Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 Hama71 you're a genius once again and Yo-chan that was too perfect. Looks like I got my work cut out for me if I want to be able to write a poem as good as that for these two. 3
BRIDGET Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 beautiful poem yojichan, I like Misu a lot too. Hama71 did a great job as always! 2
hama71 Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 Hama71 you're a genius once again and Yo-chan that was too perfect. Looks like I got my work cut out for me if I want to be able to write a poem as good as that for these two. I am not... --;;; I just don't have much picture of those two... So I just used from what I have... And I keep telling you, you can do it! You have everything in you... just true yourself little more! beautiful poem yojichan, I like Misu a lot too. Hama71 did a great job as always! Thank you! I just hope Yojichan like this... --;;; 1
yojichan Posted September 21, 2011 Author Posted September 21, 2011 hmmm...yeah...itz a bit concerned but we cant avoid it whenever it comes to MisuShin....lol u know i never fell in love with a BL couple as deep as this before... i could spend my whole day talking bout them without getting bored...>w OMG! ME TOO!!! i can talk about them all day without getting bored. something interesting is ALWAYS gonna pop up in the conversation. there's no end to finding out what's so special about them. ♥ I just don't have much picture of this two... --;;; So I just did this way... Shingyouji in white and Misu as Black... If you don't like it... I will make other one... ^^ I LOVE IT!! I think it fits them perfectly. the images you've chosen really works very well for the poem. thank you so much for the effort, hama-san. i really appreciate it. i'm actually saving the images you've made of my poems 'cause they're so lovely. Hama71 you're a genius once again and Yo-chan that was too perfect. Looks like I got my work cut out for me if I want to be able to write a poem as good as that for these two. awwww~~ thanks so much, tat-chan! *hugs tight* i'm glad you liked the poem. tee-hee-hee! ♥ beautiful poem yojichan, I like Misu a lot too. Hama71 did a great job as always! oh thanks so much, Bridget. i'm happy that the poem captured that feeling of Misu. Misu is L O V E. i can never get enough of him. 1
hama71 Posted September 21, 2011 Posted September 21, 2011 I LOVE IT!! I think it fits them perfectly. the images you've chosen really works very well for the poem. thank you so much for the effort, hama-san. i really appreciate it. i'm actually saving the images you've made of my poems 'cause they're so lovely. I am glad you love and think that is fits perfectly with your poem... I just don't have much picture of two of them so I used Baba new movie An Assassian picture here... ^^;;; But, the image do fit... sunny smiling Taiki with dark side of Baba... where I am glad that Baba this this movie or I will never have this good image... ^^ 1
yojichan Posted September 21, 2011 Author Posted September 21, 2011 I am glad you love and think that is fits perfectly with your poem... I just don't have much picture of two of them so I used Baba new movie An Assassian picture here... ^^;;; But, the image do fit... sunny smiling Taiki with dark side of Baba... where I am glad that Baba this this movie or I will never have this good image... ^^ LOL yeah thanks to Baba-chan for making such a serious movie or i won't have a picture to go with my poem. hahahahahaha!!! ♥ 1
Matti_19 Posted September 21, 2011 Posted September 21, 2011 I like a lot both Yojichan's poem and Hama's work *__* 2
yojichan Posted September 22, 2011 Author Posted September 22, 2011 I like a lot both Yojichan's poem and Hama's work *__* oh thanks so much. that really means a lot. 1
1978 Posted November 6, 2012 Posted November 6, 2012 It made me think of the song "You are my sunshine" Yojichan... I miss you!!!
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