memorex Posted September 3, 2011 Posted September 3, 2011 The sky seems so beautiful, the water in the pond is sparkling, I gently touched the flower beds, feeling alive.. For the first time ever, the days just keep brighter and brighter because of you... You make my life so colorful, You make my life so lively, You make my life so wonderful, You make my life so special... Even though I just met you, I want to know everything about you, Oh, do tell me... Please, somebody tell me this isn't a dream, because I would never dream something like this, something that would make my life so happy... Please, somebody tell me this isn't a dream, because I don't want to not be able to see you ever again.. Please, somebody tell me this isn't a dream, that I have fallen for you... Please, somebody tell me this isn't a dream, that I think you have fallen for me too.. 6
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Posted September 6, 2011 Very well written. As a poetry writer myself I can tell you put a lot into this. Keep up the good work! 2
memorex Posted September 8, 2011 Author Posted September 8, 2011 Thank you! A word of support really motivates me to keep writing poems!
yojichan Posted September 9, 2011 Posted September 9, 2011 i like the mood of the song. i feel like i'm reading young love at its brightest. that feeling of excitement and girlish curiosity. for a moment you got me imagining a little princess imagining her prince after meeting him for the very first time. the poem has a lot of hope and it's a very happy poem. 2
Miro Posted September 9, 2011 Posted September 9, 2011 I absolutely agree with Yojichan and Ueda_Angel (other 2 very talented poem writers here)! Your poem is beautiful, enjoyable to read and gives a a positive note! :hamtaro-005 (8): 1
memorex Posted September 9, 2011 Author Posted September 9, 2011 i like the mood of the song. i feel like i'm reading young love at its brightest. that feeling of excitement and girlish curiosity. for a moment you got me imagining a little princess imagining her prince after meeting him for the very first time. the poem has a lot of hope and it's a very happy poem. oh, thank you very much! remember when i told you about my first love? I wrote this after I start to love him
memorex Posted September 9, 2011 Author Posted September 9, 2011 I absolutely agree with Yojichan and Ueda_Angel (other 2 very talented poem writers here)! Your poem is beautiful, enjoyable to read and gives a a positive note! :hamtaro-005 (8): I can't describe how happy I am when you said my poem is beautiful! Ohh, thank you so much! :cuteonion57:
hama71 Posted September 9, 2011 Posted September 9, 2011 I just hope you like it... --;;; This image is from ani kimi ni todoke's ending... I feel this and you poem will go well together... I did want to use different color for the poem... but my brain is little out right now... so... I hope you like what I did... ^^ 3
memorex Posted September 9, 2011 Author Posted September 9, 2011 I just hope you like it... --;;; This image is from ani kimi ni todoke's ending... I feel this and you poem will go well together... I did want to use different color for the poem... but my brain is little out right now... so... I hope you like what I did... ^^ Oh, my god... I can't believe you did this... Oh, no.. I think I'll get swollen eyes tomorrow. I'm crying right now!! :banhbao54: Thank you so much! I really love it! *hugs* foxy3
hama71 Posted September 9, 2011 Posted September 9, 2011 Oh, my god... I can't believe you did this... Oh, no.. I think I'll get swollen eyes tomorrow. I'm crying right now!! :banhbao54: Thank you so much! I really love it! *hugs* foxy3 I am just glad you like it... When I read your poem I think this ani and manga should be perfact for each other... There was other image I thougnt about using it... but as the title go little wondering look might better so I use this... I made it to used as computer background... ^^ 1
memorex Posted September 9, 2011 Author Posted September 9, 2011 Really?! I myself actually saved this image in my computer! Yeah, might as well use it for my computer background! Oh, I can't wait to show this to my friends, saying that one of my friends from the other group of friends did this for me! :leaf6:
hama71 Posted September 9, 2011 Posted September 9, 2011 Really?! I myself actually saved this image in my computer! Yeah, might as well use it for my computer background! Oh, I can't wait to show this to my friends, saying that one of my friends from the other group of friends did this for me! :leaf6: Well if is HD screen it will work... ^^;;; Oh... it's not that good... --;;; Any one can do this... Just take some time to do and have to have much image as you can and some sense... Well when I said it... it doesn't sound easy... --;;; Any way... I just hope you friends like this too... ^^ 1
Macys Posted September 11, 2011 Posted September 11, 2011 I love the poem a loooot! And also the way Hama arranged it and matched it with the picture! So beautiful, thanks to both of you for sharing! :leaf3: 2
memorex Posted September 11, 2011 Author Posted September 11, 2011 I love the poem a loooot! And also the way Hama arranged it and matched it with the picture! So beautiful, thanks to both of you for sharing! :leaf3: Thank you so much! Yeah, Hama did it very well! ^^
hama71 Posted September 11, 2011 Posted September 11, 2011 I love the poem a loooot! And also the way Hama arranged it and matched it with the picture! So beautiful, thanks to both of you for sharing! :leaf3: Well poem itself is good... I just arranged the picture by the poem... I am glad you like it... ^^ 1
memorex Posted September 11, 2011 Author Posted September 11, 2011 Well poem itself is good... Aww...thank you! When you guys praise my poem, you had boost my motivation! 1
hama71 Posted September 11, 2011 Posted September 11, 2011 Aww...thank you! When you guys praise my poem, you had boost my motivation! If I made you motivation that is great! I just hope you keep up your work... ^^ 1
hama71 Posted September 11, 2011 Posted September 11, 2011 @hama71 thanks! You're welcome! ^^ One of best way to exples yourself is writting I believe... So I wish you keep up and do more great work and show us sometime... ^^ 1
memorex Posted September 11, 2011 Author Posted September 11, 2011 You're welcome! ^^ One of best way to exples yourself is writting I believe... I believe it that way too!
lilredphoenix Posted October 19, 2011 Posted October 19, 2011 I think this poem speaks of maybe just starting to realize you maybe be falling in love with someone, sweet beginnings. Hope you share more of your works here with us Memorex. 1
memorex Posted October 22, 2011 Author Posted October 22, 2011 I think this poem speaks of maybe just starting to realize you maybe be falling in love with someone, sweet beginnings Haha, yeah...:3onion15: Too bad I can't see him anymore. Before, I feeling content just watched him from afar, but now.. I do miss him. Hehe..:hamtaro-005 (5): Hope you share more of your works here with us Memorex. Yes, I will Thank you so much!
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