Blood lust

[鼠ドル]

You ask me if I love you,

Lying naked in my bed

The nights with you are my pleasure

But I will only give you pain

Love is not what we share, it is not for us;

This is just raw, animalistic lust

 

You begged me for mercy,

Saying you hate the pain

I fucked you ruthlessly,

Yet you're here at my door again

Darling, listen to me now;

You love me - and I love to see you cry

 

Are you willing to trust me,

To keep gambling with your life?

There are many others out there

You want a lover and I want a toy

But in the end - what could possibly be better

Than you, I, and a knife?

[Ueda_Angel]

If only I could write half as good as that! That was great and not crappy at all!

[Belita]

Well Blood Lust it is

Bloody good hun :*

[hinata--chan]

Awesome poem very sexy .

[Ginger]

I really like this kind of dark poetry - matches my personality

[鼠ドル]

THank you guys, that's very sweet of you~

[Rei]

Nezu, I really love your poem! Really really good! You are so talented twin

[Ueda_Angel]

I rest my case Nezu-chan you are more talented then I am. Everyone on the previous comments just said you were good.

[鼠ドル]

I rest my case Nezu-chan you are more talented then I am. Everyone on the previous comments just said you were good.

Just because they said this was good doesn't mean yours isn't. You got a lot of positive comments on yours as well.

[Amander123]

Soooo sexy Nezumi... I think my heart stopped beating for a moment lol.