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This was written some time ago,but here ya go.This poem is about bullying.Hope you like it!

 

The rain stops

But the pain is still the same

Can you,please,not mock?

It's not funny going insane

 

It's a disease

It's a hell

Please

Just drop that bombshell

 

Hair covering eyes

Arms covering knees

I'm like this,disguised

Would you stop the mocking,please?

 

Bruises painted on the skin

Things that you made

With a big grin

On your face

 

I feel like crap

I wish I was brave

Enough to snap

But I'm just your slave

 

I'm your damn slave

I'm tired of living a lie

Words written on my grave

Goodbye

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nachii.. :(

if you weren't bullied then you have quite the imagination :)

if you did then you have my giant bones crushing hug.

its a beautiful song :)

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nachii.. :(

if you weren't bullied then you have quite the imagination :)

if you did then you have my giant bones crushing hug.

its a beautiful song :)

 

thank you!

well fortunately I've never been bullied but some of my friends been and it hurts when you can't do almost anything to help them,it's quite sad :(

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Very touching! This is my favorite part:

 

"Hair covering eyes

Arms covering knees

I'm like this,disguised

Would you stop the mocking,please?"

 

And by the way.. I'd really punch the ones bullied your friend! >_

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thanks a lot guys!

I was kinda nervous 'cause I never showed any of my poems to anyone and I'm glad to hear your feedback!Specially in such a delicate themed poem...I really wished bullies would at least stop and think what they're doing...

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Wow Nachii, that was a nice poem all the feelings and emotions expressed by your words. I agree, why are there ppl out there who feel the only way to make themselves feel or look better is to cut someone else down? Are they that insecure with themselves? Bullying is not the answer. Hope you continue to share your talent by posting more of your works.

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Great poem Nachii... :)

 

I loved it... The pain, show's so well in your words...

 

Bullying sucks, it truly does :(

 

Big kiss f'o ya :*

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