Ueda_Angel Posted May 31, 2011 Posted May 31, 2011 Bloodstained hands, Tear filled eyes Hidden truth Revealing disguise Wandering stranger Lost his way On his own Yet another day Answers forgotten Shadows near Fate’s new puppet Dances in fear Beaten walkway Untraveled road Secrets shared That shouldn’t have been told Mysterious watcher Always aware Do not look back He’s no longer there Confusion begins Memories gone Just another dream Never real all along 10
brohne Posted May 31, 2011 Posted May 31, 2011 This is probably one of my very favorites of yours so far. It has this surreal feel to it, that is definitely dream-like. Bloodstained hands, Tear filled eyes Hidden truth Revealing disguise This stanza caught me and I was totally hooked. Love the juxtaposition of the 'reavealing disguise'. Just brilliant. 1
Ueda_Angel Posted June 1, 2011 Author Posted June 1, 2011 Yes I do write a lot. it's one of my past times. feel free to check out some more of my poems if you want.
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