Ueda_Angel Posted May 31, 2011 Posted May 31, 2011 Your eyes have pierced my very soul Your lips have made me yours. You touch has made me lose control It’s reached into my core Your voice has made me fall again Into a world unknown I know I’m always near you then Yet I still feel alone Your kiss I feel it on my skin Its better than a dream Could this be yet another sin Or more than what it seems. Your hands have found my very heart To reach it has been tough But as I feel the caressing start I cannot get enough. You’re song has reached into my ears The harmony so sweet I wash away my doubts and fears We were destined to meet 10
hinata--chan Posted May 31, 2011 Posted May 31, 2011 O my gosh so beautiful . I can relate this is what I would write about someone the thoughts in my head.
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 Beautiful, I can imagine myself feeling like with a loved one.
~Mitsukuni~ Posted October 24, 2011 Posted October 24, 2011 That was such a lovely poem!, i really like it ^^
hama71 Posted October 24, 2011 Posted October 24, 2011 It's been so long I done this... --;;; There was other image I want to use... But, I am not feeling well... so I just hope you like this... This is from manga Gogo no Ihoujin... ^^ Enjoy!
Ueda_Angel Posted October 26, 2011 Author Posted October 26, 2011 omg Hama thank you! I'm always touched when you decided to do this. Keep up the great work and feel free to add images to any other of my poems you haven't already. I enjoy seeing you do that; it makes me smile. 1
hama71 Posted October 26, 2011 Posted October 26, 2011 omg Hama thank you! I'm always touched when you decided to do this. Keep up the great work and feel free to add images to any other of my poems you haven't already. I enjoy seeing you do that; it makes me smile. Just my cold is on it's way... Winter is hard time for me... --;;; I will try to do other when ever I feel little better... I am just glad you like it... ^^
Ueda_Angel Posted October 26, 2011 Author Posted October 26, 2011 Take your time hama and get better that's the main thing. Don't overwork yourself and get some rest. You deserve it lol. 1
hama71 Posted October 26, 2011 Posted October 26, 2011 Thank you! I will try... just this time my cold seem getting worse... --;;; I just had other thing to do... so I didn't get much rest as I should... I thought about rest all day today... but, as alway... something came up... --;;; Any way... I might have to do your other work for sometime mid Nov... If I get better and have some time in between I will do one or two... ^^
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