Ueda_Angel Posted May 31, 2011 Posted May 31, 2011 Would it be too much to ask To hear the way you feel To know that when you say the words Each one of them is real Would it be too much to ask To be held in your arms. To know that if I need it You’ll keep me safe from harm Would it be too much to ask To feel your tender kiss To know that when your lips touch mine It’s ecstasy it’s bliss Would it be too much to ask To feel your silk smooth skin To make it feel so good It has to be a sin Would it be too much to ask To make forever real To promise me no matter what It’s how you’ll always feel. 14
hinata--chan Posted June 1, 2011 Posted June 1, 2011 Love it it makes me to smack the one the poem refers so they can Until they say its not to much to ask .
lilredphoenix Posted July 23, 2011 Posted July 23, 2011 So true when you want to know what the other person feels about you and you really don't get a straight answer. Beautifully put.
Rei Posted July 23, 2011 Posted July 23, 2011 Very, very beautiful! I like all the words you used, the way you made the sentences, well... the lines and it sounds really good, close to a song
Belita Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 Tat-chan, it's beautiful... "Would it be too much to ask"...you to write more?? Arigatou for the poem :*
Harukei Posted July 25, 2011 Posted July 25, 2011 love it~ it´s so beautiful... I´d like to ask those things to the person I´m in love with.
cherryyuri Posted July 25, 2011 Posted July 25, 2011 love it! love it! love it! it's kinda how i feel lately about someone else... oh gosh... i feel like printing it and putting on my journal!
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