Crimson

[Ueda_Angel]

The pain seems to engulf me

Drawing out my soul

The cries that come from me

I can't seem to control

 

I feel the blade's sharp edges

It pierces my pale skin

But as I watch the blood flow

I know I cannot win

 

I feel your long nails scratching me

Creating scars anew

And yet through all you do to me

I still will not leave you.

 

The blood, it flows so freely now

That haunting crimson sight

And yet although this seems so wrong

It also seems so right.

 

You see the wounds you've given me

The scars upon my skin

But I know you will give me more

And purge yourself in sin

 

You leave me lying lifeless now

A smile on your face

But no one sees the scars but you

You never leave a trace.

[spacingstardust]

wow, this it really good Tat-chan. It seems really emotional and draws the reader in, its rhyming scheme was amazing. good job

[hinata--chan]

Wow what a haunting poem so sad and I can relate to that feeling . I like your style of writing ^^ hope to see more.

[nitemare]

its all gloomy and sad... I like it