Take A Look (blame this one on my current depressed state)

[Ueda_Angel]

Take a deep look in my eyes

And tell me what you see

You will never see the world

The way that it sees me

 

Take a deep look at my face

And tell me who I am

It changes every passing second

It’s never the same again

 

Take a deep look at my body

And tell me what you feel

An empty shell that hides itself

From everything that’s real.

 

Take a deep look in my life

And please find something right

Take a way the tears I cry

When I’m alone at night

 

Take a deep look in my soul

And tell me that it’s real

That it’s not only pain and hurt

That I am forced to feel.

 

Take a deep look at the one

Who stands before your eyes

And tell me if it’s really me

Or just one more disguise

[misakixusagi]

awsome, sounds just like i feel atm, ure depressed state really knows how to write wicked poems. i feel connected to this one in a way, n it sounds beautiful in a sad way .

 

^_^

[Amander123]

Oh my gosh I love it!!! I sorry that you are feeling depressed though But it's so amazing!

 

The last stanza:

Take a deep look at the one

Who stands before your eyes

And tell me if it’s really me

Or just one more disguise

 

My favorite part of the whole thing. But it's all written so well

[Guest alexander]

Its just soo similar to what i am feeling right now made me tear up. tatchan is so talented, she could reach right into my heart. dont ever feel depressed alone. Ill be here for u. *hug

[hama71]

 

 

I read few time...

And the image keep comes up is from XXXholic...

Actuall image I had on mind wasn't this two...

But, when I am doing it... this two look better...

So here it is... I hope you like this two... ^^

[Ueda_Angel]

I really don't deserve this! My poems are not that good!

[hama71]

I really don't deserve this! My poems are not that good!

 

Don't said that...

Your poem is good...

I pick all this image from reading your poem... Did I? ^^