Ueda_Angel Posted May 13, 2011 Posted May 13, 2011 Walk with me and you may see The world where I reside. A place were things aren’t as they seem. I place I go to hide. Walk with me and you may see. The world I know yet fear. Where every day I wish and hope That you would be more near. Walk with me and you may see. The world where time stands still. A place where my life has no point And I have had my fill. Walk with me and you may see A fantasy come true. Were everything has purpose It started out with you. Walk with me and you may see A world within my heart. It only makes it harder Each time we are apart. Walk with me and you may see. A world I live my goal. I keep you close within my heart And locked up in my soul. Walk with me and you may see A place where we’ll belong. Where no one cares who we may be Our love will keep us strong. 15
JenovaVII Posted May 13, 2011 Posted May 13, 2011 Walk with me and you may see The world where I reside. A place were things aren’t as they seem. I place I go to hide. Walk with me and you may see. The world I know yet fear. Where every day I wish and hope That you would be more near. Walk with me and you may see. The world where time stands still. A place where my life has no point And I have had my fill. Favorite parts *.* This made my day. I think I'll read this X times a day for a long while from today onwards. I tend to obsess over a certain poem/text/lyric for long periods of time so... Your time has come, Walk With Me-sama *smirk* Love it to bits ♥ Write more and more and more okay? 2
K Posted May 13, 2011 Posted May 13, 2011 . .it really made me feel to step into your life, and walk with you in your world where no one can see but you . .while i'm reading this out loud, i felt that i was in journey, where in the end of the road, all i'll will find is YOU . .it's all YOU, (lol, ) rabbit6 . .i like this! rabbit16
Amander123 Posted May 13, 2011 Posted May 13, 2011 So amazing I really like your writing style! It was a very beautiful poem
Belita Posted May 13, 2011 Posted May 13, 2011 Walk with me and you may see. A world I live my goal. I keep you close within my heart And locked up in my soul. Walk with me and you may see A place where we’ll belong. Where no one cares who we may be Our love will keep us strong. This one could easly be a song Tat-chan loved it
Belita Posted May 13, 2011 Posted May 13, 2011 If i knew/could sing(witch i cant't sadly) i would turn this into a great song as well... It just feels right... (Read it 3x already Tat-chan)
goki Posted May 14, 2011 Posted May 14, 2011 i feel like u tryin to promise your partner that u never leave him, protect him, care for him and how great u 2 can be together
EmiZea Posted May 15, 2011 Posted May 15, 2011 Your really good with words, I have to say I really enjoy reading your poems Tat-chan
ChibiCiciChan Posted May 16, 2011 Posted May 16, 2011 Oh my gosh... This was beautiful~! I could hear it as a song in my head it was so well written.
lilredphoenix Posted July 21, 2011 Posted July 21, 2011 The words flow from your pen and when they hit the paper they magically spin a lovely combination of emotions and feelings only best described by you. You are truly talented. I enjoy reading your poetry very moving indeed.
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