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Song of Myself (another non-BL poem)


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I celebrate myself, and I sing myself,

And every flower that grows in my garden,

Will grow in yours as well.

For every key leads to my heart.

 

I hear the voice of my ancestors,

Yet I drown out their deafening cries.

 

My time had not yet come to an end,

I feel I have still not been born.

 

My blood, it flows through the veins of a dragon,

A mystical creature whose home is a child’s mind.

 

I walk down the road of life,

The stones and branches block my endless journey.

My destination is still a mystery,

But the way is in my heart.

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This one is really good. I love how your metaphors flow together and all point to how our inner journey mirrors our outer journey. beautiful work.

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. .such metaphoric (as brohne had said) rabbit14

 

. .it's a self-journey towards fantasy, an adventure of one's mind in the land of dreams yet carrying the reality :leaf2:

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I walk down the road of life,

The stones and branches block my endless journey.

My destination is still a mystery,

But the way is in my heart.

 

Liked this part very very much :)

Overcoming all obstacles :p

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  • 3 months later...

Song_of_myself-1.jpg

This is image from Adumi Tohru's Fairy Hearts 2...

I thought is perfact for this poem...

I am doing two at a time...

So it will take some time to finish all your poem to be done...

And I might not do few... if it's to violence or 18+ one I try not to do...

It was little to hard for me do do that... --;;;

I hope you like what I did here too... ^^;;

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Ok this is serious business...

She should just print these out and make like a file...

It's just outstanding the way it's done...

 

It's very very good hama...

I really think she should print them and keep them...

It's lovely...

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Ok this is serious business...

She should just print these out and make like a file...

It's just outstanding the way it's done...

 

It's very very good hama...

I really think she should print them and keep them...

It's lovely...

 

Thank you!

I really hope she like it...

I wasn't feeling well when I did that...

So I couldn't do little more...

I what to do word show better then that...

I just feel little sick... --;;;

I guess I did little carried away... --;;;

I should rest little now...

I just can get this stress problem control... --;;;

But, still I love doing this... ^^

I don't want Ueda_Angle feel bad that I feel sick doing this...

Don't feel that... I just doing this and that at same time that all... ^^;;;

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Hama71, this is so beautiful! I'm sure Ueda_Angel will like it as well :D Great job! :hamtaro-005 (6):

 

Thanks you! I just hope so... I just regret little bit... I could do better then that... T T

 

@hama71

Very beautiful! The image you've chones matches so well the poem! I love it! :)

 

Thank you! I do like the picture... Just with lettle fonts... I could do better then that... --

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Oh my! So beautiful! I like both the poem Ueda_Angel wrote and the way Hama choose the background for the poem!

 

Thank you! Ueda_Angel write good one so it not that hard for me to find image... ^^

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...I'm starting to wonder of people like the images Hama71 uses better than my poetry itself... That wouldn't surprise me the poems aren't really that good. @ Belita what were you saying about printing the images out?

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...I'm starting to wonder of people like the images Hama71 uses better than my poetry itself... That wouldn't surprise me the poems aren't really that good. @ Belita what were you saying about printing the images out?

 

Don't be... Your poem are good...

I come up with the image from you poem did I?

So you poem is good! ^^

If you really want to print out this poem...

I might need to re-do little bit...

I did fix name but still I am not sure I did good job on this... --;;;

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hello tat-chan!

 

i really like the flow of the poem.

it has a lot courage and full of hope in it.

i'm imagining a warrior ready to face the challenges coming her way.

i like it.

it has a strong message yet not overwhelmingly so.

quiet courage to be exact. :)

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