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Out of the Darkness (original non BL poem I wanted to share!)


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Out of the dark, Out of the night,

We've emerged from the shadows,

Into the sun's site.

 

Out of the shadows We come from dispair

It seems like it's gone,

But the nightmares still there.

 

Out of the fire, the flames touch the sky

The heat flows so gracefully,

Like a sweet angel's sigh.

 

The sun is our lord, companion, friend

The magic is brings us, the wonders it sends.

 

But the sun can't protect me.I belong to the night.

I belong to the shadows.

Away from the light.

 

A stranger wouldn't know me My family wouldn't care.

A tear slips down, my face.

Because, you're never there.

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Very powerful and touching. Really like the lines:

 

Out of the shadows We come from dispair

It seems like it's gone,

But the nightmares still there.

 

gives an amazing visual.

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. .oooooooooh

 

. .this one was a travel of your heart, it may had the metaphors, but as i was reading this, i got the meaning of what this poem really convey leaf4

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Very powerful and touching. Really like the lines:

 

Out of the shadows We come from dispair

It seems like it's gone,

But the nightmares still there.

 

gives an amazing visual.

 

I agree! I really liked that part as well :D

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It's beautiful Tat-Chan :)

You write so well...

It's like our dark moments, desire to be brightned...

You described them fully...

 

Thank you for posting it :)

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oh this is good, i love the words u use, i think my fav bit is

 

'Out of the shadows We come from dispair

It seems like it's gone,

But the nightmares still there.'

 

 

keep it up x

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Oh my god! That does fit Kaname-sama! I never thought of that myself till now! Arigatou!

 

Somehow when I was reading may be from the Vampire Knight...

When I get there... that image just came first...

And I said to myself... This is it!

Oh... it was right choice... I am glad! ^^

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again, again! you did it again!

i love the lyrical flow of the poem. you could almost put a melody to it.

i like the words you've chosen. it's whimsical yet strong.

i'm getting more of a feel of your personality through them.

my only critique of this really is just do a spell-check next time before you post.

other than that, it's a very good poem!

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Correct me if I'm wrong. From the way I read your poem, you wanted to go out from the darkness but you can't because of someone.

 

I think what you wrote really touches my heart. Anyway, it is a beautiful poem and I like it :)

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Correct me if I'm wrong. From the way I read your poem, you wanted to go out from the darkness but you can't because of someone.

 

I think what you wrote really touches my heart. Anyway, it is a beautiful poem and I like it :)

 

 

I actually wrote that poem back in 6th grade after my grandmother died. I was in a deep depression cause I felt isolated from my family after she died. I also missed her so much.

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I actually wrote that poem back in 6th grade after my grandmother died. I was in a deep depression cause I felt isolated from my family after she died. I also missed her so much.

 

Oh, I'm sorry.. but, she will remain in your heart forever, right? :)

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